[spoiler]you sure?
It needs heavy revising and if possible, to be revived[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]if I was gonna revise it, I would simplify it. Take away the towns and just write what happens when you arrive. Leave it open to interpretation [/spoiler]
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[spoiler]good idea, but I'd prefer to keep Argon as the main location[/spoiler]