It's a amazing story but one problem. Destiny takes place a few centuries after the collapse so it doesn't really make sense that he's a warrior without light, if he was born on venus then he would've died or fled to earth, if he was alive then than he is not now. He would have to be resurrected by the traveler to make the story work but in that case he would be filled with light.
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Thank you! I was hoping to get some corrections from the community- I'll do some tweaking. Thanks, Guardian
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Edited by Nuuuu: 4/13/2015 8:59:06 PMYou're welcome ;)