originally posted in:The Collective Anomaly
Again, more chuckles. I would just be careful about "breaking the fourth wall" when you talk to the reader. It can be a bit much at times, but it's amusing. The relationship between Sophie and Ream is pretty good.
Anyway, keep it up. I'll be keeping an eye out for chapter 3 or episode 3 or part 3, or whatever. Haha
P.S. Sovereign, if you see that I am commenting on this, your story is up next!
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Edited by AndrewReam: 3/15/2015 12:20:46 AMAs always thank you for the criticism:D