EDIT: Thank you guys so much for the positive feedback. Writing is only an occasional hobby of mine and I honestly didn't expect many people to read this. I'm not amazing, you all are.
Bungie's missions have been lackluster, so I wrote one for them.I know most of you have better things to do than to read a page of fanfiction, but I would like to hear some opinions on this idea I have for this story mission. It hasn't been proofread, so there are bound to be error and shitty dialogue. lol
*cutscene*
Ghost: Guardian, we are receiving an emergency transmission from the speaker himself. I'm patching him through.
Speaker: Guardian, 4 weeks ago a mysterious derelict ship of unknown design or origin drifted into our solar system. I sent a team of highly elite guardians to inspect this vessel. They have not been heard from for 3 weeks. This vessel could have technologies that will aid us in our fight against the darkness, or it could prove to be a bane if it gets into the wrong hands. I want you to go inspect this mysterious ship, have your ghost scan its technology, and find out what happened to the guardians I sent. Be careful. /transmission
Guardian: Sounds like fun.
Ghost: You have a strange definition of "fun".
Guardian: Don't be such a cynic Little Light. Do you have the coordinates?
Ghost: I'm entering them into the system right now.
*ship enters warp speed...
*ship drops out of warp speed in front of a gargantuan ship. In fact, calling it a ship does not describe it. Metallic assymetical spikes radiate from a round core, giving the impression of a giant sea urchin floating in space. It is the size of a large asteroid.
Guardian: Wow....that's supposed to be a ship?
Ghost: The speaker was right, none of our records show a vessel like this.
Guadian: How are we supposed to get inside?
Ghost: I am detecting trace signatures of the previous guardians' ships. Maybe they found a way in. I'm entering the coordinates into your ship's computer.
*the ship begins to move closer to the derelict structure, slowly orbiting around the back. The large metallic spikes cast shadows on the guardian's ship.
Ghost: There! The guardians' ships!
*7 ships can be seen parked next to one of the spikes. They are being held by what appears to be metallic tendrils.
Ghost: I...guess....that's how you dock. Moving us closer.
*The ship moves closer to the spike's surface. There are no visible doors, just a smooth, highly reflective surface.
Guardian: Umm, how are we supposed to get in.....
*suddenly metallic tendrils shoot our of the spike and wrap around the ship. A tunnel forms around the hatch, connecting the Guardian's ship to the derelict structure.
Ghost: Well then....shall we go inside?
*/end cutscene*
*a sourceless red light illuminates the bottom of the tunnel. The metallic walls throw reflections all over the place. As the guardian travels down the tunnel, the curvy liquid-metal appearance of the wall abruptly stops and becomes smooth and flat as he reaches the ship's interior.
Ghost: We need to find some sort of terminal or computer that we can login to.
* The guardian walks down several narrow corridors, all made up of the same spotless metal. The ship is eerily quiet. after some exploration, the guardian comes up upon what appears to be a computer terminal.
*cutscene*
Ghost: Ok, I'm analyzing this ship's systems. It's going to take a while, the Operating System is completely unfamiliar to me.
Guardian: How long?
Ghost: I don't know....wait....that's strange...
Guardian: What?
Ghost: It can't be.....
Guardian: Are you going to talk to me?
Ghost: Quiet guardian. It's reaching out to me.
Guardian: uh....Reaching out to you?
Ghost: Yes...I don't know how to describe it, but whatever operating system runs this structure...it's like its trying to communicate with me...it may be an A.I. I'm not sure yet. It's complicated. Just let me work.
Ghost: Ah! Got it.
*a large hologram appears above the terminal, showing the layout of the ship as well as the ships connected.
Ghost: Strange, there appears to be a fallen ship docked on the other side of the structure.
Guardian: What are the Fallen doing here?
Ghost: Well, they are scavengers. They were probably hoping to salvage parts from the ship. Keep your guard up. I'm scanning for life-signs. None...it doesn't detect any Fallen, It doesn't even detect us. Whatever sensors it's using must be malfunctioning. We need to get to one of the ship's main computers. I think it's this one, near the core.
*/cutscene*
*the guardian moves deeper into the ship. All of the corridors are made of the same smooth, featureless metal. Every now and then, a door will phase into existence as the guardian comes into its proximity. The walls of these corridors are illuminated with glowing lines.
Ghost: I'm detecting movement in the chamber ahead.
*the guardian enters a large chasm with a bridge. As the guardian crosses the chasm, a mysterious light emanates from the void below the bridge, illuminating the chamber, creating an eerie alien atmosphere. When the guardian reaches the end of the bridge, he sees an injured fallen dreg. Its back legs are missing, as if they had been dissolved. The dreg lifts its head up, trembling, sees the guardian, and reaches a hand up, as if reaching out....then it collapses and dies.
The wall behind the fallen dreg dissolves and reveals a large chamber. The floor is littered with Fallen bodyparts
Ghost: By the traveler's light.....was this the work of the guardians we sent? If so, what happened to them?
Ghost: Keep moving. We have to get to the core. It should be this way.
*static*
Ghost: Wait a moment, we are being contacted. It's....it's one of the Guardians we are looking for. I'm patching you through.
Cahl-rin: Guardian, my name is Cahl-rin. I was sent here by the speaker to investigate this vessel.We were ambushed by Fallen and were forced to retreat. We fled into some sort of large chamber. When the door sealed behind us, we were locked in. Our ghosts analyzed the door and say it can only be unlocked from the outside. We are very lucky you arrived. You'll need to come to our location, have your ghost unlock the door, and let us out. Be careful Guardian. My ghost will link to your ghost and monitor your progress.
*As the guardian traverses the dark corridors, illuminated by only his ghost's light, he finds more mutilated Fallen Bodies. Every now and then, a crazed fallen will jump out at him.
Ghost: These Fallen seem frantic and uncoordinated.
Cahl-rin: *static* Ha! When have the fallen every been coordinated?
Ghost: Fair point.
*as the guardian makes his way to Cahl-rin's location, a frenzied captain steps around the corner, sees the guardian and charges towards him. But a robotic eye appears on the wall, opens and fires a beam of energy. The captain is set on fire and incinerated.
Cahl-rin: Oh, I forgot to tell ya about that. Our ghosts suppose it is some sort of security system. Just aim for them as soon as you see one open up. Wait too long and you'll end up just like that Captain.
*When a wall-eye opens up, the guardian has 3 seconds to shoot it, otherwise the beam from the eye causes massive damage in seconds.
*after a while, the Guardian comes up a fork.
Ghost: Take a left here.
Cahl-rin: You should be coming up on the chamber right now.
*The floor is covered with fallen bodies, most of them look like they were trying crawl away from a certain point in the wall, where a single terminal can be seen glowing.
*the guardian has his ghost hack into the control panel
Ghost: ok, I got it.
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