I'm not trying to be stuck up, or a know-it-all, I'm just trying to help. [*]You sound older, so I'd have to suggest steering away from comments like "dialogue [i]master[/i]". I'm sure this as been said many times, but try to stop using "ok", no matter how nerbbous you are. If it's supposed to be more laid back like that, it's cool, but I understand that it is more of a "mature" class. [*] If you get extra time, try working on your pauses, though it's not something big to worry about at all - just a little fine tuning. [*]Your speach is very clear. Keep that around. [*] Your speach seems a little light, especially the first minute. It just sounds like you're trying to fill a time limit as best you can. It was basically nothing until about a minute in. Try talking about those other factors that you listed. [*] Avoid personal comments, if this a more mature class. Things about how you enjoyed "Lost" so much seemed irrelevant and kinda childish (no offense).