[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Halifax [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Douglas Brown [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] RandomlyIssued [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Douglas Brown I thought it was decent. It had a few funny parts. Half-way through, it seemed like you just got tied of trying to make it good, and finished it up however. I ddo that a lot. Anyways, your style is good. It's the best of all the stories, really. Try a different subject, and it'll be great.[/quote] Umm... thanks? Seriously, have you ever said anything good about anyones story before?[/quote] Because they are aren't good. Even mine. Mostly, it's fanfiction. Fanfiction [b] of a forum[/b]. And when it's not, like yours, you make up stupidly annoying stuff like race car tracks in jungles, random beatings, and snap endings. In fact, I retract my previous statement(s). Your story is not that great.[/quote] Douglas, in all my months of knowing you, I've never seen you so...un-optomistic.[/quote] It's that time of the year again..........