[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] commander tempu
[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] TheRealObsidian
[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] BansheeBomb
[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] morley7ali
yes he is diead
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Definitely not an alt. [/quote]
The inability for you to differentiate between two people is amusing and utterly pathetic. Look at his post, then look at mine. I capitalized (at the beginning of every one word sentence.) and have zero spelling errors (because a few of the words I used aren't even words and therefore, there is no wrong way to spell them.) and a Ninja could tell you that he has a different IP adress then I do.
Your statement is now thrown out of the window and run over by a school bus, and then picked up by me and used against you. Internet sarcasm. HA! I laugh.
So yes, definately not an ALT.
On another and more relevant note, the Fan-fiction is awful, I'd recommend setting it up on ff.net for constructive criticism and reviews. Why, you ask? So you can improve.
Edit: Just because he posts and reacts to me doesn't automatically mean that I have an alternate profile. His post is stupid and irrelevant to the entire forum, but whatever. Report him.[/quote]
You know going around giveing advice on what " You think things should be" Instead of helping is not really helping
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Anyways it needs some touch up. I have had a few flops my self but to become a better writer you gotta take the good with the bad. I suggest you come up with char backgrounds to fill that person out. You did well with Virgil but need to capture Rookies essence.
Like *It tore up Rookie inside to see so many homes destroyed. He had seen a great deal of this during his years in the war. Yet the stark realization of it all was hard on his soul.*
Great thing about the internet is you can fix stuff. Just some suggestions.[/quote]
Your opinion wasn't asked for, don't go around saying things that don't need to be said, lest you start a flame war and have a person's topic locked.
Irrelevant. I'm not saying what should be. I'm recommending what he should do in order to get better faster, but I don't want to waste my time reading the entire FF over and over and over just to tell him what the errors are, because that would result in several 10000 character long posts.
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