Not bad - the human-Covenant war's starting to feel a little dated now, though. I know with the next book of my fan fiction I'll be progressing the story into the realm of the Reclaimer trilogy. I wonder if most will stick to the human-Covenant war period - I mean, it is safe and full of opportunity. Quite easy to understand the premise, whereas with the new canon you need to know a whole load of information. Not to mention concluded so there's little risk of contradiction. But then, the constant risk of knowing your entire story could be ruined by a single line in a future book or game is what makes fan fiction writing fun for me. I wrote a rather big fan fiction a few years ago that served as a sequel to Halo 3; that's been completely shot to pieces now, obviously. But I read through it again the other day and enjoyed myself - it's my own personal little sequel, and no matter what happens in the Reclaimer trilogy, a tiny, stubborn part of my mind will always think that John crashed into Sanghelios after Halo 3. It'll be interesting to see what happens after [i]Halo 4[/i] releases - how the ratio of fan fics shift. Anyway, I went a bit off-tangent here. Good effort, keep it going, but you'll have to do something special to make a human-Covenant war story be interesting now.