So I made [url=http://www.majhost.com/gallery/thesin/Funstuff/jkeyes.png]Cpt. Jacob Keyes[/url] with my pen pad, what do you guys think about it?
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Looks like he just woke up from a hangover and pissed himself while he was sleeping. IF that what was what was drawn here today, it looks great. Without the piss he'd look great. And what's with his shirt? It's too small in length, it looks like a womans shirt, UNSC Fatigues are usually tucked in aren't they? another thing to note is your 'light source' it's kinda screwy and comes from the top and right side. BUT, the left sides of your legs are also illuminated fully, the bottoms of your legs are strangely fading to a darker shade of grey. -rubs chin- On the other hand, the leg that is in front of the back leg should have the least shown shading and the back leg's right side should be shaded. Dear god, this is a mind -blam!- to look at. It's So 2d but 3d at the same time. The Hip is too small on 'our' right side. As for the shading of the right arm on the chest, It looks too jagged and unappealing. -rubs chin- The leg on our right looks too small on the interior. [Edited on 09.02.2012 7:26 PM PDT]