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9/21/2012 8:43:06 PM
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My first "Happy" poem :)
Well here it is. Please tell me what yo think and rate.
You are on my mind
Because you complete me
Hope you understand
I am beautiful with you
Even in the darkest part of me
You're here with me
And it makes me feel the way I supposed to feel
You get me like no one else
And I know you like no one else
We both know that will never change
I'm not afraid to show you all that I am
To show you all of my scars
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Is the Flood a blog now?
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] IslocStarkiller I'm glad OP is happy for once. Have a nice weekend OP.[/quote]You too :)
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I'm glad OP is happy for once. Have a nice weekend OP.
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This thread is going to get locked so hard.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] teh Chaz [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] OneDeadCaveMan Hey, if you're going on a date, I can lend you some used condoms. It says "for livestock use only", but ignore that. They work perfectly fine on well-equipped humans.[/quote]Please stop[/quote]Problem, officer?
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Shadows1907 [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Psychotic Undead [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Creeper [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Shadows1907 OOOOHHHH creeeeeeeeeper where are you?[/quote] Sorry about that I was fapping to Cortana. Anyway nice poem I guess. So I guess we'll be going on a date in hell? Sounds hot. [/quote]Oh, you guys are going there too later? Feel free to stop by my home down there, i'll make sure my hellhounds don't eat you alive when you reach my front yard.[/quote]Ok :)[/quote]But still, be mindful of the hounds....they tend to get violent easily when threatened. And their tempers aren't the most kept.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] OneDeadCaveMan Hey, if you're going on a date, I can lend you some used condoms. It says "for livestock use only", but ignore that. They work perfectly fine on well-equipped humans.[/quote]Please stop
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] OneDeadCaveMan Hey, if you're going on a date, I can lend you some used condoms. It says "for livestock use only", but ignore that. They work perfectly fine on well-equipped humans.[/quote]Ooooh well aren't we fancy. Just use a plastic bag, kids.
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[url=http://www.internal.org/Sylvia_Plath/Daddy]Good example of a "dark" poem.[/url]
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Hey, if you're going on a date, I can lend you some used condoms. It says "for livestock use only", but ignore that. They work perfectly fine on well-equipped humans.
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Tits or GTFO. Sharpie in pooper.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Psychotic Undead [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Creeper [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Shadows1907 OOOOHHHH creeeeeeeeeper where are you?[/quote] Sorry about that I was fapping to Cortana. Anyway nice poem I guess. So I guess we'll be going on a date in hell? Sounds hot. [/quote]Oh, you guys are going there too later? Feel free to stop by my home down there, i'll make sure my hellhounds don't eat you alive when you reach my front yard.[/quote]Ok :)
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I'm sorry but this is just awful. Maybe start writing poems on things with real meaning, learn how to let the reader interpret what he or she reads. Your word choice is weak, too. 3/10.
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*eyeroll*
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Creeper [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Shadows1907 OOOOHHHH creeeeeeeeeper where are you?[/quote] Sorry about that I was fapping to Cortana. Anyway nice poem I guess. So I guess we'll be going on a date in hell? Sounds hot. [/quote]Oh, you guys are going there too later? Feel free to stop by my home down there, i'll make sure my hellhounds don't eat you alive when you reach my front yard.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Creeper [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Shadows1907 OOOOHHHH creeeeeeeeeper where are you?[/quote] Sorry about that I was fapping to Cortana. Anyway nice poem I guess. So I guess we'll be going on a date in hell? Sounds hot. [/quote]Oh creeper.....
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Rainbow A Dash [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Lazy bazooka Needs moar rainbows.[/quote]>.> <.< [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Shadows1907 Well here it is. Please tell me what yo think and rate. You are on my mind Because you complete me Hope you understand I am beautiful with you Even in the darkest part of me You're here with me And it makes me feel the way I supposed to feel You get me like no one else And I know you like no one else We both know that will never change I'm not afraid to show you all that I am To show you all of my scars [/quote]Now its perfect. (You must really like poetry eh OP?)[/quote]I do like poetry alot. :)
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Shadows1907 OOOOHHHH creeeeeeeeeper where are you?[/quote] Sorry about that I was fapping to Cortana. Anyway nice poem I guess. So I guess we'll be going on a date in hell? Sounds hot.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Lazy bazooka Needs moar rainbows.[/quote]>.> <.< [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Shadows1907 Well here it is. Please tell me what yo think and rate. You are on my mind Because you complete me Hope you understand I am beautiful with you Even in the darkest part of me You're here with me And it makes me feel the way I supposed to feel You get me like no one else And I know you like no one else We both know that will never change I'm not afraid to show you all that I am To show you all of my scars [/quote]Now its perfect. (You must really like poetry eh OP?) [Edited on 09.21.2012 1:44 PM PDT]
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OOOOHHHH creeeeeeeeeper where are you?
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Creeper This poem is about me right? [/quote]No. If any of the poems would be about you I think it would be this one Once more I have stepped across the line to stop you end all innocent lives I keep repeating to myself that everything is fine How love's blindfold wears so thin I am starting to see the monster you are You are tearing away my soul Your actions will leave a deep scar Set me free do not go on destroying me Escape is a dangerous art but my faith is strong See the chains on my wings ... still tight but loosening Night falls I make my move Tonight is your last night alive This time the war and blood and gore are mine The darkness rises deep inside me fueling my rage No longer will you haunt me You fed off my blood Now its my turn to return the favor Be thankful to survive this long because I'm just getting started now I am going straight to hell and you are coming with me! I will take your oxygen, the only thing that is keeping you alive When I am done with you the worms will enjoy reclaiming your organs
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Ah, I just wanted to post this without necro bumping: "Roses are red, Violets are blue, Assuming control, This hurts you." I read this on my phone. Whoever wrote that in the previous thread is my hero xD
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This poem is about me right?
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sgt Commando Doesnt rhyme -- 0.5/10[/quote]It wasnt ment to.
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Doesnt rhyme -- 0.5/10
