(Above is a picture of an Infectoid) --------------------------------------------------- [b]Destiny: The Risen[/b] -[b]Note: Read everything, especially the story!! It's so you understand what's going on![/b] -Note 2: If there are any suggestions you have for me to make this better, please comment what they are and I might add it. Also tell me what you like/hate about this. [b]Read the whole thing to understand:[/b] -This story isn't finished yet. It was suppose to be a game mode but now it's my machinima story! It's a story, that I originally made. I'm using it for my machinima but the story here has its own twist. There are 10 chapters. [b]'The Chosen' is Ch.1, 'Fallen' is Ch.2, 'Vex' is Ch.3, 'Cabal' is Ch.4, 'Hive' is Ch.5, 'The Survivors' is Ch.6, 'Infectoids' is Ch.7, 'X' is Ch.8, 'Collision' is Ch.9, 'Endgame' is Ch.10!![/b] -... Post what you think if this story would be good or bad. These are just the backbones, so more detail and edits can be made. Be constructively criticizing and honest. -[b]Edit[/b]: This will be turned into a 100% story. Just wait and I will tell you when it's ready... -Keep the comments coming, every hour I'll bump this topic! -Guys read my story in my game mode idea! Here's the link to the 'Abandoned' game mode/story: [url]https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/108359221/0/0[/url]. Enjoy and leave feedback.