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originally posted in:The Black Garden
Edited by SaviorsBlood:
6/12/2015 8:36:12 PM
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Shachal - Chapter 31: Severed
You've been wondering, you've been asking, and here it is. The fabled Chapter 31! Haha, well as much as it might have felt like it, this was never a fable, but it's here regardless. Sorry to keep you waiting. As some of you know, there were some things preoccupying me lately, but I would never leave things unfinished for you guys. I truly hope all of you enjoy the read. It was a little frustrating writing this one, but overall I like it. Thanks for coming and I look forward to the rest of the journey with you, one that's just another step closer to its near completion.
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For more on this story, please join and follow [url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Detail/1047016]Fireteam Shachal[/url]. Thank you for reading!
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3 RepliesHo-ly-Shit....... Just...... Wow... [i]- That sent shivers down my spine. - Absolutely incredible. - The suspense was palpable. - Masterful ending. - 10/10 would read again.[/i] Thoughts on chapter: [spoiler]I was really happy that they finally caught a break, successfully retrieving Petros like that. I was on edge throughout that whole section. And then THAT shit happened. What is this? Game of Thrones? Goddamn... I've said it before, your descriptions of the setting are so visual that I felt like I was watching a scene from a movie instead I reading words on my phone. It's that good in quality. That ending... Holy hell that was THEE most badass thing I've ever read! I love this shit so fukin much![/spoiler]
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5 RepliesAn interesting turn of events. Did't see that ending coming. Not impressed with the City's efforts to keep the gang apart not working. Nice chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.
