Could you help me do some revisions? There's an excerpt below if you guys want to have a go. Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks! [quote]“Oh my f0cking god damn shit baby Jesus I love cheese f0cking sandwiches.” Lucifer said as he watched a football player shove a pencil up his ass. The announcer for the F0cking Asshole Gay network moaned the voiceover, screaming about f0cking rabid geese with a stick and putting his nose in a shemale’s penis hole. The sack of babyshit pressed itself against the remote, smeared greasy crap onto the buttons until the channel changed. A giant dick filled the screen, and then there was a toothless crackwhore yammering about how loose her stinky pussy was and how much like a honkey’s asscrack it smelled. The sack of babyshit changed the channel again and Lucifer threw his sandwich at the T.V.[/quote]