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5/20/2020 1:04:13 AM
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I won’tbe RPing, but I did give it a read!
It was all really good! The line near the beginning “he was unable to provide sustenance” felt a little weird to me. Can’t quite place why.
But otherwise it’s great!
[spoiler]Also reminds me I’ve still yet to introduce Divine, though.. Not that that’s happening anytime soon! It’d need a good 9-10 posts of buildup![/spoiler]
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Thank you for the feedback! That makes sense, looking at it that one sentence, it [i]is[/i] a little off. The wording probably doesn’t fit with the rest of the story... 🤔
