Hey everyone, I made a video on what it is like to play Destiny 1 for the first time in 2019. I bought the game over the summer and spent some time playing it with my friends. I thought it would be fun to make a video about my experience and put it out there. This is the first video that I spent a lot of time on and I know that I can make a lot of improvements so any feedback, especially constructive criticism, is welcome. Here is the link: https://youtu.be/z18HzBPXJi8 Some things I already know that I need to improve upon are: Editing Skills Better Audio Setup Better Writing to Really Hone my Points in Here is a link to my script as stated at the end of the video: https://pastebin.com/AQSs4RmH I don't except this video to gain any traction I just wanted to get it out there because I wanted to make a video for a long time but kept putting it off. This is why I would really like some advice on how to improve my videos :)