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Edited by villainous: 1/23/2019 10:15:56 PM
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The enemy’s bond of light- Chapter 2: Band of Hunting

Somewhere in the Spine of Keres, Dreaming city, the Warlock was waiting. A Queen’s royal guard confronts the Warlock with a terrified face. She could hardly breathe when she begged for help. The guardian’s ghost was about to ask what was wrong, but at that moment a gigantic Scorn shoots her in the back. “We have to help her!” the ghost exclaimed. The guardian drags her behind a rock and the ghost tells her to stay put. When she coughed, the guardian then knew he had to fight, and do it fast. The Warlock boosted over the rock and tossed a grenade. The flash from it caused the Scorn to look away. The guardian used his super, which he filled up while doing The Blind Well. He slammed his solar sword into the ground causing a Well of Radiance. He continued to fire his gun at the Scorn. The ghost knew the guardian was worried because he didn’t know this type of Scorn. Yet, as the Scorn kept pushing towards him, he kept firing more and more. He flew up, switched to his Heavy, and fired a rocket. Everything went completely white for a moment. The Scorn was dead. The guardian returned to the royal guard. She asked for his name, but almost instantly, the guardian’s ghost claimed that was confidential. “I was going to tell Petra,” she replied, “she could give you a reward..” The Warlock has never said his name, but he told her. “My name is Phantom-3.” She doubted for a moment, then she agreed to it. The ghost transmitted the guard to Petra. The Warlock walked over to loot the Scorn when Petra called saying, “Thank you for rescuing that guard. I have a reward for you guardian.” The ghost just flat out replies,”The guard said you would probably have a reward.” Petra chuckled. “You know where to find me when you want it.” The guardian zoomed up to the tower where Petra was. As he was claiming his reward Petra reveals that Spider wanted him in the Tangled Shore. The guardian’s ghost thanks her, then they return to orbit. The guardian appeared on the landing zone, turned and ran into Spider’s lair. Spider seemed happy when he arrived. “I want you to kill a Scorn Abomination for me.” Spider says. The guardian nods, and Spider gives him coordinates to an area in the Four-Horn Gulch. The Warlock turns and starts to leave when Spider yells out,”Careful, he is a big dangerous thing. He is slow though.” The guardian hopped on his sparrow and left. When he got to the coordinates he saw nothing. Suddenly, tons of Scorn crawl out of nowhere. They crowd him and the Abomination that Spider was talking about appears. The Scorn grabbed onto the Warlock and the Abomination was about to slam his fists down onto the guardian. In the nick of time many bullets, rockets, and supers flew at the enemies. The Warlock got up and turned around to see a group of five Hunters. [b]To Be Continued in the next Chapter[/b] [spoiler]Im sorry about the delay. I had it ready, but life was taking different turns[/spoiler]

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  • That’s a lot of Hunters… Good job. It looks like you’ve already improved your writing! If you work on adding a little more detail, just to flesh out the story a little more, it’ll be great. Make sure dialogue never ends up in the middle of a paragraph! That’s very important, because it can be hard for readers to pick out the dialogue when it’s swamped in text. Separate your paragraphs more often, too. It’s okay if you end up with small paragraphs. It will make the story seem less choppy and abrupt. I look forward to reading more

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