It was a dark time in the reef. The war were beginning, all could see it. But chose not to. They did not wish to see their children die at war. Nor did they wish to see their home in flames. None did. Most of the fallen left, turned against us. Those who were loyal to the queen, who stayed with the reef, lived shunned by all, loved by none. They did not deserve this. No one does. Some of the fallen were brave. Brave enough to to launch an attack on the queen's bay and succeed. They were very, very, wrong. But still they persisted. They attacked at night. Planned to explode the gates. With that, they were successful. Until they saw 20,000 Queen's guard aiming their guns directly at the heads. The rest of the battle tells itself. In the end, there were two vandals and one captain left. They were sent to interrogation.
The queen herself spoke to them. The first were the vandals, who knew English.
And so, the queen spoke.
"Not many try to raze my bay, even fewer live to tell about it."
"Soon, you will not live to tell anything," said the first vandal. "Not when our kell kills you himself."
The queen was not angry. In fact, it seemed as if she was that made her laugh. In her strange, anger looking way.
"What do you have to say?" She asked the second vandal, ignoring the last statement.
"This..." He paused, thinking of something to say.
"This was a mistake. I just wish to leave. I wish to live in the reef. Live as if this never happened."
He looked down in shame.
"I will decide your fate soon." She answered with. The door behind her opened, a single guard stood there. The queen looked him in the eyes, and nodded. All three of them left. The captain was next. He was brought to her throne, his hands chained.
"You, she said. "What do you have to say?"
"I don't have to answer to you. You are not my ruler." He spoke. "I bow to the kell of kells.
You are no kell to me."
"I am a ruler to the people you kill." She said. "I gave you everything. We let you stay. assimilate. But you resisted."
"You never ruled me. You never will. You rule a dead land. A land that has nothing. You are nothing." The queen turned to her right and saw the second vandal.
"You wish to stay, correct?" She asked him.
"yes, please! I will do anything!" He answered with excitement.
She looked around for a weapon, something painful. Retaliating. Something-
Something of their own.
She turned behind her, to be greeted with the captain's rifle on the ground. She picked it up and threw it to the vandal, who barely caught it.
"Kill him. Kill your captain."
The vandal was petrified by the thought, but he proceeded by the queen's order. he walked over to the captain. He pointed the rifle to his captain, who looked down in dread.
"You will never control me," said the captain. You have no right to rule me."
The queen looked at the vandal and nodded, then looked back at the captain.
[quote]"by this right alone do I rule."[/quote]
The vandal closed his eyes, then released the five flaming pellets into the captain's head.
The queen spoke one last statement:
[quote]"I am Mara sov. I am the lord of wolves.[/quote]
[spoiler]not as good as the last one. Like and stuff, blah blah blah. Let me know if there is any weapon lore I should do.[/spoiler]
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Freaking awsome
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Awesome man! may I suggest you do hawkmoon? It's an awesome gun and the lore is lesser known than the other hand cannons. Cool post:)
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Please do Thorn or necroshasm
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Dude, nice job this made sense too... :3
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Hey guys! Just made another! https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/211595765/0/0 Enjoy!
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Even as you said, this is not as good as your Dreg's Promise, never the less - it's still a pretty good story. Thanks for sharing.. If I might suggest - add the #community tag to your stories so they'll show up in the Community section where people share their works of creativity. Looking forward to seeing more..
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So, this is my fan made lore schedule: Queenbreaker's bow Patience and time Dragon's breath Jade rabbit Last word (depends) Thorn (depends) Red death Zhalo supercell The first curse Plan C Remember: this schedule may change down the road. Let me know if there are any others you may want. Don't hesitate to ask.
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Awesome! Kept it up!
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Edited by firedragon32145: 8/23/2016 12:01:12 AMWhat about thorn it has a really interesting lore behind it:D
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Could u do one for the last word
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Edited by A Tigerstorm: 8/22/2016 10:57:28 PMThis is actually pretty cool compared to the one we have from Bungie
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Another mega bump
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Amazing
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THIS IS AMAZING!
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Just go full circle and give us a story for the Bow!
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I think it's just as good as the last one. An interesting weapon I would love to see is Zhalo Supercell. I love your work and hope to see more of these.
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Good work
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Cool! Can I recommend one?
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You should do Red Death the Mad Guardian stuff looks like it would make a cool story
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You should make more of these. Write them out on paper and correct them then post to the forums.
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The vandal who lived is Variks, correct?
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Sweet just as good as the last one maybe try for the tlaloc??
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It's a really good read, but I'm slightly confused. I thought fallen wolves were only welcome after the reef wars. You know when the queen killed their kell and took his place. If this is at during the beginning of the reef wars, then surely there's a hole? Idk I'm willing to be corrected if I'm wrong.
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Do dragons breath or patience and time
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Do more