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Edited by Aizen35: 3/3/2015 8:08:24 AM
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a poem (GONE)

Ever felt so low, like a storm that hits and oddly you feel powerless being thrown around like a tornado and when it stops suddenly you feel like crumbles. Only wish is to come across, a stop signal only to...find nothing there, but when the lighting appears, you flinch up looking for someone, yet something does not remain the same, and the only person who you thought, would always be there, seizes, like they were never there, then you stare off to, a distant land of wonder, and thoughts cooling down like the rain, that hits the ground, and you freeze up because your all alone, and the hurt that you felt, you wish that tornado would stay around, deep down, who would wanna be alone? with someone you known is suddenly gone.

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  • I look and I see Nothing inside Nowhere to run No place to hide Playing an actor A series of dramas Oh by the way You overused commas :D

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    • That's not really a poem, more like a monologue. Free form is technically a form of poetry but this doesn't fit into that category because it has no rhythm or structure. Nice try though.

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