Hey guys, here's the second part of the ongoing story I'm writing. This one is considerably shorter than the last one, so it's a bit of an easier read. Constructive criticism is appreciated. I hope you like it. :)
Part two: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nEfY5k92_1chUk44bZ6YYIjrDvq0YUuker_zR_SUttE/edit?usp=sharing
And here's Part one for anyone who didn't already read it. (It's long, sorry.): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Aqsp02IvYmD70eWHhOmrflxscWpJ9PIHuImKh33pYM8/edit?usp=sharing
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Make more
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Great story
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Bump for more!!
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Not bad. Not the best fanfic I've ever read - feels a bit fast, some of the characters a bit off - but still, pretty good job.
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Will there be a part 3? This is the best fan fic I've ever read
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Someone wanna comment for later please?
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Sounds like a petition has been started, in favor of you continuing with your story. Lol This was fun to read. I also hope you continue.
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Awesome man. Part 3? Or when is the book coming out? haha
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Well shit....now I need a part 3...... [spoiler]will you make one? That'd be incredible! [/spoiler]
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hey awesome read!!! - so...uhmm...whens part 3? Id love to find out how she develops her arc light and her thoughts and experiences - i love the narration from the "view from inside her head" gives - its perfect
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Awesome man! Are you goin to write anymore?
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Nice. Keep it coming
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Awesome. Keep them going. I love them
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Amazing, keep them coming