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Edited by Onyx076: 2/2/2016 2:59:24 PM
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Trials of a Guardian: All Chapters (Destiny Fan-Fiction)

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Hello everyone and welcome to [i]Trials of a Guardian[/i]. You will be able to access all chapters of my story from here. A story that follows two foul-mouthed, reckless anti-guardians, a brother and sister, through a newly discovered area on Venus; The Trials of Mar. Trials of a Guardian: Orders (Chapter 1): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/105590426/0/0 Trials of a Guardian: Captured (Chapter 2): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/106668875 Trials of a Guardian: Lies (Chapter 3): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/107618648 Trials of a Guardian: Who Are You? (Chapter 4): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/109059011 Trials of a Guardian: Wake Up (Chapter 5): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/110919395 Trials of a Guardian: The Trial of Shadows (Chapter 6): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/112242209 Trials of a Guardian: Miles Away...(Chapter 7): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/115240435 Trials of a Guardian: The Trial of Corruption (Chapter 8): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/116746553 Trials of a Guardian: Emergence (Chapter 9): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/118150247 Trials of a Guardian: Fight to the End (Chapter 10): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/121176362 Trials of a Guardian: Never Go Back (The Final Chapter): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/123605275 Trials of a Guardian: Deliver Us from Sin (Epilogue): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/123607085 I would also like to thank [b]TheGaurdian2142[/b] for helping me with some of the backstory as well as the main story. I am using his concept of a level design that he created called "The Trials of Mar." So a credit goes out to him and I'm also going to provide a link to a post he created where he goes into detail about what each stage of the "Trial" is like and what players have to do in order to complete them. I hope you guys enjoy the story, feel free to leave me a comment, whether you liked it or hated it or have any changes or suggestions. I'm going to be posting a poll on here again for you guys to take, also feel free to hit that "Like" button. Thank you all for your support! Here is the link to Gaurdian's [i]Trials of Mar[/i] level design: https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/806204/106999022/0/0 I am also going to post the chapter index to my other story [i]The Ascension[/i], feel free to check it out and let me know what you guys think! Enjoy! https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/99858091/0/0

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          • Edited by Onyx076: 8/1/2015 1:02:56 AM
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          • In an effort to ensure that everyone is notified promptly when each subsequent chapter of this story is posted, I am asking for everyone's help. I would like to gather a list of people whom are interested in being alerted when each new chapter comes out. Even if I notify you already, please comment to this so that I don't forget anyone. A simple 'yes' or 'me' will suffice. Thanks everyone!

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            • Do you know when you will write the final chapter?

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              • Haven't read this yet but I really liked ascsension so I'm definitely going to read this. Do you need to read the description for trials of mar to understand whats going on?

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                • I just finished reading all of the chapters, and I must say, you've a pension for writing. There were a few minor writing errors, but overall I'd like to say; I hope you're perusing a career in writing. If not, you'd do well to do so. Kudos, gaurdian.

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                          • [quote]Hello everyone and welcome to [i]Trials of a Guardian[/i]. You will be able to access all chapters of my story from here. A story that follows two foul-mouthed, reckless anti-guardians, a brother and sister, through a newly discovered area on Venus; The Trials of Mar. Trials of a Guardian: Orders (Chapter 1): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/105590426/0/0 Trials of a Guardian: Captured (Chapter 2): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/106668875 Trials of a Guardian: Lies (Chapter 3): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/107618648 Trials of a Guardian: Who Are You? (Chapter 4): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/109059011 Trials of a Guardian: Wake Up (Chapter 5): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/110919395 Trials of a Guardian: The Trial of Shadows (Chapter 6): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/112242209 Trials of a Guardian: Miles Away...(Chapter 7): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/115240435 Trials of a Guardian: The Trial of Corruption (Chapter 8): https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/116746553 I would also like to thank [b]TheGaurdian2142[/b] for helping me with some of the back story as well as the main story. I am using his concept of a level design that he created called "The Trials of Mar". So a credit goes out to him and I'm also going to provide a link to a post he created where he goes into detail about what each stage of the "Trial" is like and what players have to do in order to complete them. I hope you guys enjoy the story, feel free to leave me a comment, whether you liked it or hated it or have any changes or suggestions. I'm going to be posting a poll on here again for you guys to take, also feel free to hit that "Like" button. Thank you all for your support! Here is the link to Gaurdian's [i]Trials of Mar[/i] level design: https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/806204/106999022/0/0 I am also going to post the chapter index to my other story [i]The Ascension[/i], feel free to check it out and let me know what you guys think! Enjoy! https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/99858091/0/0[/quote] Please respond so I can read please! Excited to read!

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                              • So I called in the cartel and they produced the strongest meth ever made and you got so high you deleted my singing monsters and ate 7 pounds of dog food and 5 pounds of cat food creating a food baby in your stomach. 9 hours later you created a cog or dat depending on gender we couldn't tell, it inherited you small penis. Soon you became an Internet star famed across YouTube. But then in a tragic accident you left it by the stove with the web cam streaming on twitch and you left the gas on from cooking tacos an hour before. The baby spontaneously combusted. The meth that you had before on the bus was trapped inside the baby and it filled the air. The viewers on your YouTube and twitch where filled with horror as their beloved dat was killed. The meth was held in to long causing the ultimate high. You soon became delirious shitting on the lit stove, peeing on the camera and dancing the rain dance. As the cops arrived they instantly became high as well and the five of you had a gay -blam!- fest. However your asshole from previous encounters with other men was too big so they used a pineapple to try to please you, half way in it got stuck. As the meth cleared off, and you lost your high. But the meth is so addictive that you called me asking for more, you sold yourself and your sole to have more. So that's how the Mexican cartel own you

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                              • Onyx this is great stuff, keep it up

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                                • Ugh I just read chapter 7 and now I'm super mad bcuz there's no chapter 8 and I'm impatient lol so I can't wait for the next chapter, chapter 7 was really good and I want more! Lol. :)

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                                      • Oh man thanks! Ben dying to read this!

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