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originally posted in: Ghost: A Destiny Short story
8/18/2014 5:00:20 AM
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  • More people need to read this! I was very into it, and was disappointed when I realized there wasn't more :/ You got me with the first post, and the second one just made it better. Great job man. Lots of grammar errors, but that's okay :) Pleases keep writing and I will keep reading.

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  • Yeah. The funny thing about writing a story in a perspective such as this it gets kind of...awkward. Especially when your trying to integrate those dramatic pauses. I promise the next one will be in much better quality as it's sort of weird to post this on a forum. :l Thanks for reading! :D

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  • Oh yeah, the amount of work that goes into all punctuation in a story is actually overwhelming. Don't even worry about it that much man, just keep up the awesome work! It's inspiring!

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