I am doing my own music and like putting it together with game visuals as well (proof above) That said - I agree with the other two post, lead guitar was not mixed properly, plus I would like to see some sort of editing in the visuals as well. You have some changes in pace and athmosphere in the song, you should adapt this into the visuals. So for me your clip started out pretty cool, but then I felt a bit letdown, because no editing at all. Other than that - not bad at all, keep it up :)