Like the story! Keep it up, I want to see more!
It was okay, but I rather see something better...
Terrible, you need to do ALOT more work on this!
So for about a couple of weeks now I've been racking my mind trying to come up with an idea for a story about a fire team on the moon fighting the Hive. It is going great! I wrote this at a point when I had 18 pages, and 9,276 words. I would just like to have Bungie look at this and give me some thoughts about this, being my rough draft...
I also have something else I would like to bring up, I pre-ordered Destiny the second I had the ability to, so I contacted my provider (Gamestop) and I asked about getting a code for the beta, I was adamant about that code so I was on the phone for about 45 minutes trying to get the code, until I was told a pre-order was never made! I didn't have the receipt because it was the same time I pre-ordered GTA V so I tossed it thinking I wouldn't need it.
So I ask as a large fan of Bungie, you being the company that rocked my childhood and made me become obsessed with you guys, so if you like what I am doing and want to see more, please tell me! Also, if it's not too much to ask, I would really apreciate a Beta code, I love what you guys do and I hope you love what i've written! Thanks!