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8/14/2007 11:10:00 PM
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Unit

Chapter 0: Prologue [b][i]0000 Hours, April 26, 2050 (Military Calendar)/ Bay of Plenty, New Zealand[/i][/b] “So, this is the child destined to stop the destruction of earth?” “Yeah, but at the age of 14” “What?! We don’t have that much time! We are about to be destroyed by the Persian Army! They Control more than you think! They are united from the countries of Iran, Saudi Arabia, Iraq, Afghanistan, and more! Israel and Russia can’t fend them off! China fell to them! All the Muslims people joined them in the Jihad. The Holy War, we need an army of elite soldiers. We need them fast!” “Then they shall be trained…but it will take a few years….we need to start the augmentations now…..” “Remember….he’s an officer….” “Aye, a 2nd Lieutenant he shall be.” Chapter 1: Quick Attack [b][i]1000 Hours, April 25, 2064 (Military Calendar)/ Fort Benning, Georgia, United States[/i][/b] “Sir, we need to board the plane to Fairbanks, Alaska, to rendezvous with 2nd Lieutenant Jesse Lovegrove. He has 500 men picked out for the “Unit”.” Eversmann tells the Major “Roger, tell Jesse I said ‘What’s up?’” The Major orders Eversmann “I want 500 suits of Mark IV armor ready when we arrive.” “Affirmative, 2 suits come of the line every 30 minutes; we will be there about 1700 hours.” “Daniels, get your ass up here! We need to move IMEDIATELY! We got Persian SU-37s on our asses and the F-22s can’t keep up!” “Sir! Incoming!” He yells as a missile comes shooting into the base “Fire crew to Barrack 38, Fire crew to Barrack 38!” the Major hears in the background when he gets up. “-blam!-, Eversmann.” He says to his friend “Sir, C-130 is down…” he tells Major while coughing “I want JAVALINs, everything we got! Now!” “Got some…” “Hey, Mother-blam!-! Eat this!” he yells as he fires a missile and hits the cockpit of one of the 5 SU-37s “Take them out!” He yells “Roger!” Eversmann and Daniels yell as they fire 2 more missiles one hitting another SU-37 in the wing forcing it to crash into another “Ev, I can beat that!” He claims as he fires one and it rips through the air intake and hits the next one. “Next time I need them out ASAP!” [Edited on 08.15.2007 1:12 PM PDT]
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  • Lets hope more people are too
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  • I'm definatly looking forward to it.
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  • thanks I'm going to work on more tonight
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  • Looks good, I like it.
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  • "Get Jesse on the line" “Can’t they’re being attacked too!” “What?” “Persian Special Forces are attacking Fairbanks!” “Captain Jesse Lovegrove, This is Major, pull out, I repeat PULL OUT!” “Sir, all we can pull out is about 20 black hawks, that’s only 220 men!” “10-4, we can’t help them……I’m sorry….” “Yes, sir…..” “Soldier what’s your name?” the Major questions a PV2 “Private Peterson, Sir!” “Don’t salute, just answer my questions, where is your commanding officer?” “2nd Lieutenant Crupper is over their.” He tells the Major “Peterson, welcome to the ‘Unit’” he tells the young soldier. “Thank you, Sir!” “Crupper, what unit you command?” “Engineers, we are setting air explosives.” “Damn it, you better take those jets out.” “Major, Captain Monty is on the line!” “Tell him, I want those -blam!- jets out so I can move the ‘Unit’!” The major turns around to see that 3 SU-37s are bombing a tower to the south “Ok, Ev, Daniels, Peterson, your with me, grab your M68s and your JAVALINs. Hey, Soldier, what’s your name?” “Corporal Pelican, sir” “Grab your gear; we are abandoning this base….” “Prep a Blackhawk, we are extracting out of here…” “Sir, people are still here!” “Look, these are my brothers, I don’t want to leave them here, but they are Rangers, and Rangers lead the way. Ev tell Jesse, we are going to Halifax and bring the armor.” “Message sent…
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  • Cause it hasn't unfolded
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  • I don't like the story.
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  • In this time, the process of maintaining a airforce is hard when the PA is advancing at all directions, your losing oil and such, so they are using outdated aircraft to fight, and those SU-37s, those are newb aircraft for what i have planned for chapter 2 in one week
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  • I'm kinda confused. Why are you still using F-22 60 years in the future? It's like using a P51-D Mustang or Spitfire right now. Unless you mean its a uberly awesome, but not awesome enough, variation of the F22. And the SU37 is a multirole, while the F22 is an air superiority fighter. I don't want to be an ass, but it's just what I noticed. Good story, but some kinks that need to be ironed out. [Edited on 08.15.2007 12:51 PM PDT]
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  • its pretty good. nice story so far.
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  • thanks , thats the 1/6 of the first chapter
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  • lol Not bad..
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  • Actully it not like 300
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  • Not bad, it's cool how you're integrating 300 into a futuristic setting, or at least using elements from it in the future.
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  • People want to be in the story but don't keep it alive....
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  • Added to the library.
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  • This wont happen cuz everybody knows the world ends on December 21, 2012! Duh. Jk
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  • PM sent. This looks pretty good. Keep it up.
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  • Yeah i plan on writing one every 2-3 days
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  • thanks for addin me to the story. good start man
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  • PM me if you want to be added into this story....
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