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8/11/2007 11:15:31 PM
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My story.

You all wanted me to write a story, so here's a little taste of what I'll be handing you in a couple days (probably). [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=3#12238986]The rest of chapter one.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=7#12291639]Chapter two.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=11#12566673]Chapter three.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=14#13842765]Chapter four.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=17#14667877]Chapter five.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=20#16192180]Chapter six.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=24#17891872]Chapter seven.[/url] [url=http://s191.photobucket.com/albums/z110/AutoRedialer/?action=view¤t=Epictale.jpg]puffy's picture. It's made of win, but I think that we can all agree on that.[/url] [url=http://img441.imageshack.us/my.php?image=omahcgeecy6.jpg]Vertrexz's comic.[/url] [url=http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c110/themadblimper/jagdpanzy.jpg]This is the tank that Blimper is using.[/url] [i]Motion. Light. A figure was speaking in a muffled voice. Then, darkness again.[/i] Sniper McGee woke up in a cold sweat, panting. He had been having these dreams, or rather nightmares, for a while now. He got up off of his bed and walked over to his window. A cool breeze made him feel a bit better as he looked over the city of The Flood. He felt like this place was his one home, the one place where he belonged… A knock on the door snapped him out of his thoughts. [i]Who could be here at this hour?[/i] He walked to the door, matting down his hair on the way. He took a breath and opened the door. A figure stood, dressed in black, and was facing the other end of the hall so Sniper couldn’t see their face. “Yes?” Sniper asked the person. He turned and looked at him, light blonde hair looked untidy and windswept, his face contorted in a mask of pain… “Colonel Corbec?” McGee sounded surprised and confused. Corbec glanced down the hall again, then, hunched over in pain, he stumbled over to the nearest couch and grunted as he sat down. Sniper now saw that the Colonel’s hand was covering the side of his stomach. “Corbec, are…are you okay?” McGee asked. Corbec wasn’t paying attention though. He was looking around the room, glancing at the door every now and then. “They’re coming,” the Colonel whispered. When he finally looked at Sniper and saw the questioning look he was giving him, he glanced at the door again and winced in pain. “You’ve got to get out of here,” he said through clenched teeth. McGee looked at the spot where Corbec was holding his side, and saw his hand was covered in blood. “Corbec, what happened? Were you shot? Who did this?!” Sniper’s vision became distorted from anger. “Listen McGee…you’ve got to…” here the Colonel paused for a moment, he grunted in pain again “…got to find Blimper. He’ll know what to do.” Suddenly there were footsteps in the hall. They stopped in front of McGee’s door and he could hear voices mumbling something. Slowly, barely daring to breathe, Sniper crept up to the door and locked it. Immediately the voices stopped. [Edited on 02.27.2008 11:38 AM PST]
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] halo2mnky Imma harass him on XBL until he writes his next chapter. Edit: LOL I HATE IE7, THARS NO SPELCHEEK![/quote] Good thing I've been 360less for the past 3 weeks.[/quote] That won't end well.
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] halo2mnky Imma harass him on XBL until he writes his next chapter. Edit: LOL I HATE IE7, THARS NO SPELCHEEK![/quote] Good thing I've been 360less for the past 3 weeks.
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  • For some reason, this is the first time I've noticed his story...
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  • Imma harass him on XBL until he writes his next chapter. Edit: LOL I HATE IE7, THARS NO SPELCHEEK! [Edited on 07.18.2008 6:11 PM PDT]
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  • well...summer break should be right around the corner for one Mr. McGee, so the wait shouldn't be that long anymore...
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  • WTF? How did Sniper get blacklisted? Man i was really hoping to read some more....
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] halo dude6464 Cmon Sniper. Have the next chapter up for mah B-day tommorow, [i]please?[/i][/quote]No, -blam!-. This chapter was supposed to be for [i]my[/i] birthday, but school is taking over McGee's life. MY BIRTHDAY, not yours! O:< [Edited on 04.23.2008 1:17 PM PDT]
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  • Cmon Sniper. Have the next chapter up for mah B-day tommorow, [i]please?[/i] [Edited on 04.23.2008 1:15 PM PDT]
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  • It's cuming guys, dun worry it gon be k. Seriously though, I guess he finished the next section, but just needs to post it >_>
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  • I finally built up the attention span to enter this thread and read the whole thing. Totally. Worth it.
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Duardo Come on McGee, be a man and give us [i]something[/i].[/quote]
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  • Come on McGee, be a man and give us [i]something[/i].
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  • This is definately an epic win. Great story McGee, can't wait for more....
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  • hurry up im waiting for chapter 8
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sith Spartan 117 [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] halo2mnky Hey Bungie, I'm BAAAAAaaaaCK!! *a nickel to the person who can name the movie. Except for Tater. He's a webcam MVP ya' know...*[/quote] uhh...The Shining?[/quote] It's still me, just a different body. And no, it's Independence Day.
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] halo2mnky Hey Bungie, I'm BAAAAAaaaaCK!! *a nickel to the person who can name the movie. Except for Tater. He's a webcam MVP ya' know...*[/quote] uhh...The Shining?
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  • c'mon, u should put a kick ass Aussie who dies in the end with a massive explosion.
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  • You should put a really awesome Australian in it who gives his life in the end, called Walter Goodfisher.
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  • This is incredible.
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  • you need to hurry There are no good storys any more ever since that story by haflax ended
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Str1k3rForce You should try to get this published into a book (Just change some of the character names).. How long have you been writing short storys for?[/quote] I've been dabbling since the summer of '07. Nothing serious. I knew I wouldn't be able to get my chapters out very quickly once school started. It's not procrastination. Advanced English and biology 11 give out a lot of homework.
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] halo2mnky [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] halo dude6464 Any ETA on when the next chapter will arrive McGee?[/quote] When he loses weight. (never)[/quote] So how much is liposuction these days?
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] halo dude6464 Any ETA on when the next chapter will arrive McGee?[/quote] When he loses weight. (never)
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  • You should try to get this published into a book (Just change some of the character names).. How long have you been writing short storys for?
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  • Any ETA on when the next chapter will arrive McGee? [Edited on 04.11.2008 9:59 PM PDT]
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  • Hey Bungie, I'm BAAAAAaaaaCK!! *a nickel to the person who can name the movie. Except for Tater. He's a webcam MVP ya' know...* [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee Don't mistake affection for pity, my friend.[/quote] Don't mistake us liking your story for us hating you for being a lazy procrastinating prick.
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