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9/2/2006 9:39:29 AM
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The Flood 3!

[b]The Aftermath.[/b] Colonel Corbec had flown the Piggy Fool Helicopter all the way from the ruins of Money Marine mountain to the CPO Fraser Helicopter hire Station. He bypassed it and landed the magnificent Helicopter in a Forest Clearing nearby under the red, evening sun. But he didn’t land it so close that nearby that it would attract unwanted attention. He carefully made sure he had left no evidence behind that would link him to the chopper. Then, taking the still sleeping maid away, he went to the tree-line and prepared his Spas 12. He tucked it into his shoulder and aimed for the external fuel tank. Firing once, the entire Helicopter exploded into a bright ball of licking flame and sizzling metal. The maid still snored. Corbec scooped the girl up. He’d destroyed one more piece of evidence against him, now all he had to do was eliminate the people that had seen him in the rental station. The Receptionist was just working over the rental lists, ready to send a fine to DDR Master when the automatic door opened with a soft hum. She looked up in time to see a man in the doorway, back dropped with the sun behind him. “Can I help you?” She asked, confused. “Not really.” He said, the mask on his face making his voice sound metallic and strange. The man revealed a shotgun, and the receptionist screamed. [i]Bam![/i] She flew backwards as if hit by a car, and smacked into the wall, leaving a bloody trail as she slipped down the wall. Corbec picked up the waitress again, and brought her inside. Carefully, he set her down next to the dead receptionist. Then, he searched the computer. He released another virus to delete any evidence he ever took out a Helicopter and replace it with another person. Echo 360 now had a massive fine to pay up. He then went through the security cameras and deleted the footage that showed him walk in and hire a Chopper, and the incident just now. Now all he had to do was kill off the salesman, the one other person who’d seen him here. “Barbara?” Someone asked from around the corner, and the salesman walked into view. He saw the masked man with the gun and turned to run. [i]Bam![/i] He slammed into a wall and collapsed into a pool of his own blood. “Job done.” He said without a hint of regret and carried the still sleeping girl out to his TT, parked in the garage. He loaded her into the passenger seat and got into the right hand side of the car. He tapped the car in appreciation. It was like coming home. The silent Maid slept through the entire journey to Corbec’s Mediterbungian Home, giving Corbec time to think about what to do with her. He decided he would burn that bridge when he got home. Eventually, by the time the sun had sunk beneath the horizon, Corbec reached his home. With exhausted arms, he hefted the almost vegetable-like Maid into the house. He took her upstairs and set her down in the bed, tucking her under the Egyptian cotton sheets. “Now where the hell am I going to sleep?” Corbec said to himself, walking out of the one bedroom in the house and down the stairs. He decided to take the sofa in the living room. He removed the armour and hid it away in a closet. He was still thinking about what to do with the girl when he fell asleep. Pyroshark forced his eyes to open. There was a blinding light all around him. Where was he? Why was he here? He remembered a searing pain, Ninjas, bullets, screaming and blood. The Queen! He tried to get up and find her, but the pain was too intense. “Be still.” Said a strange voice. Pyroshark settled back down, unable to see past the light. “Who are you?” Pyroshark wheezed. The light receded, revealing a white metal ceiling. “We,” said a man leaning over to see him, “are the Grizzled Ancients.”
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  • [quote]Wow. Just wowz. I love it!! I finally got an action scene! Yay. These stories are awesome. How do you come up with such good work,Corbec? I was gonna try to write a fan-fic, but I think my attempt would be pitiful compared to what you write. :P Anyway, can't wait for the Flood 4! [/quote] Well, I just have some time on my hands, and the support of Family and friends. And I'm sure your efforts won't be so bad. Just make sure you have enough time. Anyway The Flood 4 comes along in around a couple of weeks. I'm off to Dorsetshire now, I won't be on for the next four days.
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sid Saber Wow. Just wowz. I love it!! I finally got an action scene! Yay. These stories are awesome. How [i]do[/i] you come up with such good work,Corbec? I was gonna try to write a fan-fic, but I think my attempt would be pitiful compared to what you write. :P Anyway, can't wait for the Flood 4! [/quote] yes write a fan-fic that would be awesome!
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  • Wow. Just wowz. I love it!! I finally got an action scene! Yay. These stories are awesome. How [i]do[/i] you come up with such good work,Corbec? I was gonna try to write a fan-fic, but I think my attempt would be pitiful compared to what you write. :P Anyway, can't wait for the Flood 4!
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  • You what?
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  • This looks like something...
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  • I forgot to say Doctor woot, that you are metioned in the beginning of the story. You're in a marraige scandal in between Cabr0na and The Arbitress.
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Pyroshark Oh, so I [i]am[/i] still alive... I think... Oh, and Corbec, I put The Flood 2 up on my [url=http://www.freewebs.com/pyroshark1]Freewebs[/url] page. I'm considering doing it for ZOMG Zombehz as well, but I need to write more of it first. Good job so far, I'm interested to see what's going to happen now. -Pyroshark-[/quote]you haven't made a second chapter yet? :P
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  • Either way, I have a four day geography trip now. I won't be back for quite some time...
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  • [u]The Cast[/u] [b]DDRMaster:[/b] Some bloke who Corbec took advantage of and used as a cover in the CPO Helicopter Hire Centre. [b]Echo 360:[/b] Another hapless victim that Corbec used to his own ends. [b]Sally Sabar:[/b] Highly attractive woman with a mysterious past. Though no-one knows her actual name, she is actually Sid Sabre, once a maid in the service of Queen Cortana5, she received amnesia, and forgot everything... Everything except her unnerving knack to be able to use any weapon, blade, gun and make a kill with it. [b]Pyroshark:[/b] Some politically correct sap who tried to stop Corbec’s efforts to take over the Floodian throne. Naturally, he failed and is now paying the price. [b]The Grizzled Ancients:[/b] A collection of highly intelligent clones who have lived in isolation under Money Marine mountain for a great length of time. [b]Colonel Corbec:[/b] Dashing Anti Hero, Ladies favourite, Literary genius extraordinaire, Intelligent, Charming and Irresistible to any lady, he rules with honour and freedom. For now… [b]CPO Fraser:[/b] Industrialist turned hero, his bravery was not enough to save him from Corbec’s ploy. He was conscripted into the armed forces, and died in Flood Lin. [b]General Guscon:[/b] Militaristic Dictator of Undergroundica. [b]Pezza:[/b] The last of the Forum Ninjas, he made the wrong choice and joined Undergroundica… [b]General Ardias:[/b] Trustworthy, efficient Floodian General. [b]Lady Die:[/b] Evil, sadistic head of Special Operations for Undergroundica a veteran with years of experience, you just know she’ll wind up dead, considering she’s fighting Corbec after all. [b]A whole bunch of people who had 10 second lifespans or were just vehicle names: [/b]Ranging from MIG 15 to Casey, from Cookie Ninja to Savage Shadow. [b]The Lady Die Squad:[/b] A group of equally heartless people who follow Lady Die with unquestioning obedience. They include Hamdog, Dawgz Fan 117, Eagle 23, the list goes on… [b]Flaming Idiot:[/b] An illiterate, indecipherable, most likely mentally retarded well, Idiot. Z0MFG!1!LoLzorz!!!1!””! 73h L337N3ss [b]Tinos:[/b] A female vehicle officer, dumped into CPO’s remnant squad. [b]Mech Warrior20:[/b] A bastard traitor to his country, more importantly Corbec’s country. Not the right career path if you want to stay alive.
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  • *What?* I'm not going to advertise your group BTW, sorry. [Edited on 10/1/2006]
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  • Wha? Anyway, the cast is almost done. and by "bump" I didn't mean anything. I only "bump" girls. I said bump as in to increase your rank.
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  • Aight, playa...*Gets bumped down ranks for saying that*
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  • Good Good. Advertise it, and I'll bump you up a couple of ranks.
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  • Thanks, and I joined your group.
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  • I have big plans for the next addition, maybe even Pyroshark'll show his mug somewhere along the line... But for more info, or if you just like the series, go to my club, it's in the sig.
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  • Alright, I look forward to it. *Puts two thumbs up*
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  • It'll be a very good part, I assure you. You won't die at all. Cool? Sorry for the delay, I'm writing up the cast.
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Colonel Corbec Yup. And you'll be someone who doesn't get wasted in the most painful way ever with a ten second lifespan. [/quote] Ok, help out a fellow atheist... [Edited on 10/1/2006]
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  • Yup. And you'll be someone who doesn't get wasted in the most painful way ever with a ten second lifespan.
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  • Alright...?
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  • [quote]*applauds* Astounding. Simply astounding. Another phenomenal work. I have no parts myself that were my "favourites"; everything was equally good. I liked the final battle with Pezza, but I reckon it could've been a bit longer. I can't wait for The Flood 4! =) -Pyroshark- [/quote] I couldn't be bothered to do a massive mega super long showdown a la Matrix Revolutions with Agent Smith and Neo, so I just patronised Pezza (not exactly a wise choice,) by polishing him off very quickly. [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] mastersnake17 MasterSnake17 - MasterSnake was a member of the G.N.A.A., until Java's invasion took Earthrealm by storm, and MasterSnake's soul was spared, he was a chosen warrior, destined to fight against Java. Surviving an attack from Java's extermination squads horribly mutilated, he was kept alive by artificial respirators and an unbroken will to fight. The events of Java's invasion had profoundly changed MasterSnake, he left behind his life of crime with the G.N.A.A. and vowed to become a force for good, at least for a time.[/quote] Nothing so drastic, I'm afraid, but you will be in there. The Flood 4 will probably come out around Half term, which is a couple of weeks off.
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  • Anyway, I'll read it right now, and when I'm done I'll edit my post and tell you what I thought of it...BTW I'd like to be in The Flood 4 please. I read it and it was pretty good, better than anything I could write. Anyway, make my character this and see if you can work it in...somehow... MasterSnake17 - MasterSnake was a member of the G.N.A.A., until Java's invasion took Earthrealm by storm, and MasterSnake's soul was spared, he was a chosen warrior, destined to fight against Java. Surviving an attack from Java's extermination squads horribly mutilated, he was kept alive by artificial respirators and an unbroken will to fight. The events of Java's invasion had profoundly changed MasterSnake, he left behind his life of crime with the G.N.A.A. and vowed to become a force for good, at least for a time. [Edited on 10/1/2006]
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  • *applauds* Astounding. Simply astounding. Another phenomenal work. I have no parts myself that were my "favourites"; everything was equally good. I liked the final battle with Pezza, but I reckon it could've been a bit longer. I can't wait for The Flood 4! =) -Pyroshark-
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Colonel Corbec What this time?[/quote] id... rather not say....
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  • What this time?
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  • Sorry i wasnt commenting, again, I was blacklisted, AGAIN.
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