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12/5/2005 9:09:09 PM
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Part 5: Rise of the Mods

All of the Mods had left to perform their various duties. Shishka was sitting at his desk filling out a list of problems for Achronos. The Sewers were almost full of Spam, there was no way for people to find each other in the vast expanse of the Flood, and most pressing of all, the amount of people trying to destroy the city with Spam and Flames. He looked up as the door opened. "Hello Steel." He said with a smile, "It's good to see you." Steel smiled back, "It's good to see you too." She rushed over, tears in her eyes and gave him a hug, "I'm scared. Men seem to be following me everywhere. And it's not just me, it's all of the other women in the Flood. Heck, even Halifax gets followed by men and women!" Shishka let out a small chuckle, "He can take care of himself, don't worry about that. Do these men hurt you though?" He asked, concerned by the terror in her face. "No," she said, this was the part she was dreading, "But the Mods threaten me. They seem to think that they own the place and everyone in it." "What?" Shishka stood up, the blood rising to his face, "How dare you accuse the Mods of something like that? They were hand picked and they have all--" "It's not the old ones," She cut in, "It's your new recruits. They seem to be abusing their power. I'm afraid." She held onto him as he tried to move away, "You are the only one I can trust." Shishka sighed, "Alright, I'll look into it. In the meantime, you need to go back to--" "Don't send me back!" She wailed, "I don't feel safe! None of the girls do! Please let me stay." She was on her knees, begging. Shishka was shocked, he had never seen her so shaken up. She had been sad before, even angry a few times--That was something he feared more than the mass Spam attack--But never scared. Not like this. "Please." She murmured again, pressing her tear-stained cheek against his hand. "Alright." He said. -------- Douglas frowned when he came out of the dressing room, "You want me to infiltrate the Spammers camp by dressing up as a girl?" Halifax laughed, "Of course! How do you think I manage to get information? I have put on so many disguises I can't even remember half of them." Douglas sighed, "Are you sure this will be helpful to the Flood, not just some way for you to amuse yourself?" Halifax smiled, although Douglas couldn't see it since Halifax was still in a darkened portion of the room, "Actually it will do both." Douglas sneered and then left the buliding. He had to admit as he walked down the steps, this dress was very pretty. ------- Texas Ben came rushing around the corner, searching for MCs Brother. He saw the signal and stepped into a vacant thread. "Well." Mcs Brother said, not wasting time on greetings. "The spy has infiltrated their camp." "Camp?" "You know what I mean." Ben replied hotly. MCs Brother smiled, "Good. Make sure she remains faithful." Ben sighed, "Why am I the one that does all the following?" "Because I'm the only one that seems to be doing any thinking." MCs Brother replied quickly. "Hey, this whole rebellion was my idea!" Ben fumed. "You would have never pulled it off without me. Now, will you please stop shouting and follow our...client?" Ben left, face red with fury. So long as he did what was asked, that's all MCs Brother needed. -------- Dragon Eyes watched the entire exchange from the shadows. [i]Well,[/i] she thought to herself, [i]it seems I'll have some competition.[/i] She arrived back at her group, grim faced. Everyone gathered around her to hear the news. "Alright, it seems MCs Brother is leading a different group. I'm afraid that we will have a rival if we beat the Mods." Splitt spoke hesitantly, "Wouldn't it be better to ally with them?" Dragon Eyes laughed, "No. MCs Brother has already cowed Texas Ben into submission. I will not let him control me. We will strike when the strike. And once victory seems imminent, we will stab him in the back." "Uhh, won't he notice another group coming with him?" Budweiser Man asked. "Yes. That's why I'm going to make him think we're on his side, but not allied. I'll let him know that I mean to help, I don't mean to serve. And in the end." She slammed her fist into the palm of her hand. "You get the idea." [Edited on 12/5/2005]
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Kilroy Oh! The begging! I almost forgot! For your pleasure: Halifax, I want a part! I'm not expecting a main character or anything. Just a passersby, innocent random victim, etc.[/quote] You know what, just because you asked so nicely and you have been such a good member of B.net, I think I'm going to put you in the story. Wait, that was my nice side talking again. People stink at life. I rule. And no.
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  • Oh! The begging! I almost forgot! For your pleasure: Halifax, I want a part! I'm not expecting a main character or anything. Just a passersby, innocent random victim, etc.
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MCs Brother Are you saying I'm evil?[/quote] I'm saying you could potentially be a criminal mastermind. If you worked at it. I mean, you'd need some kind of a catch phrase like, "The Brother's in the house! Let the terror begin!" Or something like that. I dunno.
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  • Are you saying I'm evil?
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MCs Brother I always wanted to be a bad guy. [/quote] Indeed. I hesitate to tell you it was done by your request because I'm afraid that people will start begging again. But actually, I wouldn't have chosen you if you didn't seem like the type of person who [u]could[/u] do something like this. So people, I didn't do it just cause he asked. His character fit and that's what matters. Whew. And Kritz...your wish may come true. [Edited on 12/5/2005]
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  • :\ I want to see Yoozel smashing up the "Above you" threads! Isn't it nice to want? >> Kritz
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  • I always wanted to be a bad guy.
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] crapdancemagee [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Halifax [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] DragonEyes [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Halifax Dragon Eyes has her own agenda to overthrow the Mods and take control of the Flood. [/quote] What?! *Backs away from topic* I would never do a thing like... *Runs away* [/quote] You can't hide from your true feelings! We all know you are power hungry! Ban her now![/quote] No!That's impossible![/quote] Hehe, what do you think of your wife now? Freak!
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  • Yeah, that helped a lot Halifax. It's good.
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  • dont forget about my new series, hopefully [url]http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=5560287 [url]
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Halifax [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] DragonEyes [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Halifax Dragon Eyes has her own agenda to overthrow the Mods and take control of the Flood. [/quote] What?! *Backs away from topic* I would never do a thing like... *Runs away* [/quote] You can't hide from your true feelings! We all know you are power hungry! Ban her now![/quote] No!That's impossible!
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] DragonEyes [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Halifax Dragon Eyes has her own agenda to overthrow the Mods and take control of the Flood. [/quote] What?! *Backs away from topic* I would never do a thing like... *Runs away* [/quote] You can't hide from your true feelings! We all know you are power hungry! Ban her now!
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Halifax Dragon Eyes has her own agenda to overthrow the Mods and take control of the Flood. [/quote] What?! *Backs away from topic* I would never do a thing like... *Runs away*
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Kilroy [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Halifax [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Kilroy Nice. I like it. And it does seem like you hate the mods....[/quote] Gosh dangit! The Mods are the freaking good guys! Why does it seem like I don't like them? In the story, my character is trying to help them for crying out loud! And Crapdance, you are the first person that has said that. I like it.[/quote] Really? I thought he was the head spammer! *is confused*[/quote] *sigh* Alright, I can tell some people are confused. I'll give you a run down: Texas Ben started this entire Spam thing. He's the one who originally wanted to overthrow the Mods. MCs Brother is using him to his advantage. Halifax isn't a major part of the story, he/she is just a guide, or an informant to help Douglas and Pistolsnipe who are trying to help the Mods. The Mods are just trying to do their job. But now it's a bit more personal. Reiginko was driven out and they want to make sure the Flood doesn't fall to the rising Spam. (I would use Appendix, but too many people haven't accepted that glorious revolution yet.) Dragon Eyes has her own agenda to overthrow the Mods and take control of the Flood. Steel, Shishka and Douglas are the main protagonists right now and MCs Brother is the main Antagonist. Does that clear things up?
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Kilroy [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Halifax [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Kilroy Nice. I like it. And it does seem like you hate the mods....[/quote] Gosh dangit! The Mods are the freaking good guys! Why does it seem like I don't like them? In the story, my character is trying to help them for crying out loud! And Crapdance, you are the first person that has said that. I like it.[/quote] Really? I thought he was the head spammer! *is confused*[/quote] No,I'm the guy with two hands.
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Halifax [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Kilroy Nice. I like it. And it does seem like you hate the mods....[/quote] Gosh dangit! The Mods are the freaking good guys! Why does it seem like I don't like them? In the story, my character is trying to help them for crying out loud! And Crapdance, you are the first person that has said that. I like it.[/quote] Really? I thought he was the head spammer! *is confused*
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  • ^_^ okies. your welcome..I dunno why I didnt mention it the forst time I posted...but yea...gald I caught that for ya ^_^ -Diz
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] SteelBulletproof Oh yea...I dunno if any one mentioned it before...or I just missed something while reading...in the beggining with me and Shishka (i think) you switched the names...well you kept switching between Shishka and Achronos...not sure..exactly which one was supposed to be there..or like I said..I missed something while reading that part... -Diz[/quote] Oh shoot, I thought I caught all of the Achronos names. It happened when I typed his name in that first part. I got mixed up. Thanks Steel.
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  • Oh yea...I dunno if any one mentioned it before...or I just missed something while reading...in the beggining with me and Shishka (i think) you switched the names...well you kept switching between Shishka and Achronos...not sure..exactly which one was supposed to be there..or like I said..I missed something while reading that part... -Diz
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Kilroy Nice. I like it. And it does seem like you hate the mods....[/quote] Gosh dangit! The Mods are the freaking good guys! Why does it seem like I don't like them? In the story, my character is trying to help them for crying out loud! And Crapdance, you are the first person that has said that. I like it.
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  • Wow! Halifax nice job!!
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  • That story is so much better without me.Great job,Halifax!
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  • Very nice ^_^ I love the way you are able to portray all the Characters/members of the Flood so well ^_^ So awesome! -Diz
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  • Nice. I like it. And it does seem like you hate the mods....
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  • Hell I was in Part 3 when I was a spammer.
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mr Propaganda I don't mean to spoil the mood, but isn't it slightly boring when all of the characters used are the same in every story.... It a good story but it needs new people. (Not me, it feels corny when you're in these things)[/quote] The problem is, there aren't many people that stand out. I use people I know because I like to try and get them right. I like to make the characters act the way I think the real person would act in a given situation. Now, granted, I don't do a great job of it and some of the characters may seem bland and pretty much the same, but that's what I like to do. If you'll notice, I'm actually adding a few new characters. Splitt is playing a more prominent role in this one, even though I doubt anyone knows him. Heck, I don't even know him. Dragon Eyes has made her first major debut in one of my stories. It's not as if I'm trying to make this exclusive to certain people, I'm just trying to make it work in the best way possible.
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