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Edited by BloodSyn: 2/23/2017 6:39:58 PM
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The coming Wars!

A loud constant whine, white everywhere. Can't move... The ringing starts to fade and the light begins to clear. Someone running at me. Who... Zavala. "Guardian can you move? We need you on your feet now!... The Cabal are taking them! We have to stop them!" I start to try and stand, but another explosion before I can catch my balance.. I feel the heat throw me back... I don't remember anything after that. Just waking up in a Cabal ship. It's dark, but small faint glows here and there. It's still too difficult to make out much. I don't see my ghost. I don't see any ghosts; only other Guardians; maybe a dozen, all unconscious or groggy and trying to piece this together like myself. As I start to look around with a little more focus I notice that we are all bound... to be expected if we are prisoners I guess, but then I notice that there are no Cabal with us. No guards? Why? It just don't make sense. I can see a faint glow towards the front of the ship. It almost looks like a large box with some something inside. I can't see well enough but I'm sure our ghosts inside. I can't see the light in them though. Are they dead? no if they were we would be too wouldn't we? The ship pulls hard left and then downward. We are landing. Some Guardians have barely gained reason and some are still out... Either way there's no time to think. The back hatch open to a bright light. Dusty sand blowing. Is this Mars? No, something - someplace different. I don't think I've been here before. There are rows making a formidable wall of Cabal troops on each side of the hatch exit leading forward, eliminating the notion of making a run for it.. It looks about 20 cabal deep each side, possibly more, all almost shoulder to shoulder stretching for at least 200 yards forward. There much be thousands! this is more Cabal in one place than I've encounter across my entire journey. The tunnel created by the Cabal army on both sides leads to a large building with one standing in the center as to show it's position of dominance, but it's not as big as... A single cabal roars into the ship, waking the rest of the Guardians. It presses a button and our bindings are released. I notice the armor on this thing doesn't look like those I've see before, something is different...the colors are off, but there is something else too. Are they a new... Another roar! It's pointing out and starts grabbing and pushing Guardians off the hatch platform. We all begin to bail off the ship as the walls of Cabal start to erupt with roars and yells. A few more cabal join the first and start pressing us, marching us forward. My focus is again on this central figure. It's not like the others I've seen before. It's not in heavy armor like the Legionnaires, yet nowhere as small as the Psions. It isn't adorned like the Primus or Valus or with any sort of giant banner, or headdress. Its cloak doesn't resemble that of the Flayers either. No, instead it's whole armor appear to be a badge of honor, covered with some sort of..glow...energy maybe. It almost appears like the armor itself is pushing the figure off the ground just enough to pass a blade between, yet the figure remains in perfect balance. As we get closer the figure raises a hand and a wave of energy hits all of us. I brace for what's to come next, for pain, to be blown back... but there is nothing... just a glow. It speaks... and I understand it. This energy is linking us; our minds, somehow. I can not only hear and understand it's speech but SEE it's thoughts as it speaks. It says that the various fronts of Cabal; the Blind Legion, the Skyburners, the Siege Dancers and others we've fought and more we've yet to encounter, want nothing more than to wipe out the Guardians, no the humans as a race but they don't understand that they need help from us to fight the greater threat. I begin to think "who are y".. and my thought is interrupted with "I am the Tactitian, the Battlemaster, The High Legions Commander, I am Preator Shau'auln. We have much to discuss but I wish it understood first; we do not want you as prisoners but as allies." And if we refuse? "Then annihilation will be all any of our futures hold." Then why attack us? "Only a handful of our kind can communicate with yours as I am. We've sent one before. Your "Speaker" meet her, had private counsel, when concluded he turned his back and ordered her killed. After her death I took her command and seek to complete her mission, but make no mistake... I will not allow the same to happen to myself." What do you want from us? "We have watched you and your kind follow this person... this "Speaker" blindly. We have see you do many great and wondrous things... things we can not. Yet we too have abilities and technology you do not." We will teach each other and we will show you the truth about your "Speaker" and the true threat to us all. You will see what I know and I you." And our ghost? "Corrupted by an impure light. I acknowledge you need them...their "light" for now. They will remain untouched as yourselves, Their "light" is suppressed to keep them dormant as to not act as spies and interrupt our goals, yet as their light isn't extinguished yours is able to continue. We may have use of them in the future, but for now our conversations end. Take them to the chambers... Rest, Recover, and Rethink on what you truly know for yourself and that which you've been lead to believe. Tomorrow I teach you to think for yourselves." Authors notes: I plan on making a series of these each leading to a different tower leaders story after the fall of the tower and each will have interaction with a different threat from the past that still exists.
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  • Edited by BloodSyn: 2/27/2017 5:47:48 PM
    Cabal Story Continued pt 1 I'd like to say I got a good nights sleep and woke up refreshed and renewed. Instead I haven't slept at all. Really I don't know when the last time I feel asleep was. Sleep didn't seem important anymore. Death was sleep in a way, but for a glimpse; then brought back by the ghost...over and over. Now I can't feel the ghost though and my thoughts race. It doesn't help they've split our happy little group up. I don't know where the other are. I don't know if they are okay. I don't know if they are alive. We had just started to get on the same page with trying to create an escape plan. Then the thunder rolled in waves of heavily armored feet. The doors open and everyone is gone. I don't know if Shau'auln is still "connected" and heard our plan or if it's just coincidence. All I know is this room is a nice prison cell and I'm alone with nothing but my own thoughts. No mission, no bounty, now directive... Just me and my own thoughts. What seems like an hour later they brought this "stuff" like I were suppose to eat it. I can't remember when he last time I ate was. I can't remember the last time I was hungry. I can't remember the last time I was anything. Happy, sad, angry, nervous, afraid. Since being brought back by the ghost I haven't felt any of this. Maybe I haven't had time with all the constant fighting, maybe the light suppressed these things. One thing is for sure though; for the first I can recall I'm nervous. It's been at least 12 hours and I haven't seen the sun begin to set. I don't know the cycle of this plant yet. I don't know what planet or even what system we are in. Thundering footsteps are coming again. The door opens and I summoned out. We march to a new chamber with a large holo map and Shau'auln pointing and moving planets and systems around as if it's looking for something. "She... I prefer She to it. Please" Great "SHE" is back in my head. I almost think it chuckled when I thought that. Shau'auln, where are the others? "Being tested as you will be soon, but first we have much to discuss." Were the others brought here as well to "discuss?" "No, there is something in you... different. You can...Feel. The others are not there yet. They are not open" Great, you're not going to get all "ohhh you're getting sleepy... uhhhh your under my spell" on me, are you? "No, not at all. I'm just stating that your eyes are starting to clear where as the others are still content to have their covered by webs." Why am I here? Why are any of us here? and why did you split up all the Guardians? "One thing at a time young one, but first... you are guardians no more. You are Warbound now. Whether you like it or not, war comes. You can go to it on your own two feet or it can come to you while your on your back. As for why you are all here; like I said yesterday, you have what we need and we have what you need. As for why I split you up...Revolt without hearing us out is a little premature. The simple fact that would could have already killed you and didn't should have earn your trust long enough to hear us out first." It's not exactly like we've had the best relations in the past. What would you do? "Think reasonably and use logic." Right or wrong, That's probably what got you in your current job title and the former boss out. "You may be correct but please try." Okay so what's the deal with the map? "To understand the truth I present you, you must first understand our past." Oh great a blah blah blah back story like I care. "Fine, then let me ask you a question." Shoot. Bad choice of words as a group of cabal grunt surrounding us raise their guns... Shau'auln chuckles again and they lower their weapons. WTH is this things deal? My thought is interrupted again as she starts to speak again. "Have you ever wondered where the light or the darkness comes from? Every creature has both present within them, just as good and evil does as well." Your telling me a frog knows what evil is? "No, that would take comprehension, so let me clarify... Light and darkness are present in all living things whether or not you know it exists, just as good and evil does. To act on a pure or corrupt nature such as good or evil with intent; you would have to have understanding, or some higher awareness than just basic instinctual behavior." Where is this going? "Have you ever wondered what would happen if a shadow had a soul or a physical form? You've seen it in the Taken but do you understand what it is or what it means?" Uhm... you should have kidnapped Eris Mourne for this conversation not me. "In a sense the taken were not created by the hive, they were hunted, captured and corrupted by it. The darkness resides in balance with the light, but in the absence of light the darkness can manifest more purely. The hive perfected how to achieve this without concern for the consequences." But we beat Oryx and his taken form and his taken army....End of Story. "No young one... how Nieve. The end? But if that were true you'd already be dead. That was just the beginning. That was Oryx toying with things he couldn't comprehend, much as your "frog"... No there are things far worse born and living in the darkness than those converted." What do you mean? "The hive wizards use songs to peel the light away from the living and cause pain leaving the darkness behind with agony. The darkness feeds on this agony and further pushed the light out. when all light is gone the flesh dies. When the light dies with the flesh, the darkness takes the soul and is teleported to the other side." What over side? "When this dark soul is brought back, it is brought back into a physical being. The stronger the soul the stronger the physical form becomes." What Other Side? "The stronger the physical form the more it hungers for the light of others" WHAT OTHER SIDE? The breaches you entered to fight the Taken were but a shift between two dimensions... a temporary space Oryx though was safe to hide his followers and himself. We don't know what to call the other side yet, we don't know what to call what is coming through. All we know it it's like a cloud breaching through and it's hunger is so huge that it devours entire planets of life." So you expect me to believe there is some sort of evil planet swallowing galactic force out there and you want ME yo help YOU fight it? "Yes" Ha... HahahhaHaaaa. Your a riot, I didn't know the cabal were comedians. "This is no laughing matter. we must stop it or we will all perish." And just how do you figure I can help? "Your light is all that has pushed back the darkness so far, but it is not all your light. It came from someone... the traveler. But do you know where the traveler came from?" Authors notes: That's it for today I think. I'll try and add more soon.

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    • The Coming Wars? Stop stealing from PornHub... "White everywhere" I saw what you did there. : h

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      • This would be a fantastic opening to destiny 2

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        This is really good man.

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      • I like what you've written so far. Very intriguing and you took a different approach to one that we would expect! Please, continue as you wish!! I for one am hoping that you get noticed and maybe bungie will hire you!!

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        • This is awesome!!

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        • Thank you all so much for the great support. I just kind of threw something out there and didn't really expect but a couple "meh" at best so you guys are awesome. I suck at Crucible but good to know I'm good at something lol. I work a regular full time job, got family w/ very active boys and so on, so been a bit tied up. I'll have more out next week for sure and hope to get a few more pages like the original done. Just praying I don't get myself too far off established canon lore or get myself in a corner I escape.

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        • Add in: "For some reason my weapons had been replaced with plastic replicas that shot foam darts"

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          • Please make more this is fantastic if you make more I will support it and read it keep it up.👌

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          • This was absolutely incredible! Can't wait for the next one!

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          • Excellent!

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          • There should be only 1 war the 1 on nerf herders but nice read

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