[spoiler] This is an original story mission. I accept all criticisms of what you may have to say. Also to note...
-This is part of a quest of two missions; This is part 1.
-Light Level: 330
-Mission Summary: [i]Return to the Cosmodrome and investigate SIVA activity at Skywatch.[/i]
-That's it, I think.[/spoiler]
Saladin: Something's wrong. SIVA still lingers in the Cosmodrome. Not only that...I detect an old foe here...find out what they know about Efrideet, and make sure she's found before SIVA get to her.
[You spawn in Skywatch, as Devil Walker Tanks fight the Hive's massive Tomb ships, some of them crashing. You activate your sparrow and start driving toward the Lunar Complex.]
Saladin: When Sepiks launched his attack on the Devil's Lair, it caused a domino effect across the Cosmodrome; Fallen were turning into SIVA, and the Cosmodrome became engulfed in war. What you're seeing right now is just a part of that effect.
[You enter the Lunar Complex, hearing gunfire above you.]
Saladin: The Hive never had a chance... Shiro, have you contacted the Vanguard?
Shiro-4: Yeah, I did. There's a massive presence of SIVA in the Terrestrial Complex...wait, are they trying to corrupt Rasputin even more?
[You fight through the Lunar Complex, and come into Skywatch.]
[spoiler]You have two options here. I will explore both of them.[/spoiler]
[You decide to run into the Jovian Complex, with Eris coming into the comms.]
Eris: Guardian...I sense something...a ritual...they're trying to bring back someone.
[You fight through the Hive, mostly Hallowed, before arriving in Omnigul's spawn room, as you hear the shriek of Deathsingers.]
Eris: No...that's impossible...kill them!
[Hive start flooding the room, your objective to kill the 5 Deathsingers in the room. You kill them all.]
Eris: Wait...they dropped something.
[You pick up the Engram, as the mission complete banner shows up.]
[spoiler]This first option would've been a quest that would've led to getting a Y3 Necrochasm.[/spoiler]
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[You decide to move toward the Terrestrial Complex. It's a darkness zone.]
Shiro: Wait...why are the Kings highlighted in green?
You see the Kings fighting SIVA, as an unknown voice speaks through the comms, speaking English.
?????: Look...I'll make a deal with you. You help us destroy SIVA, and we won't kill you, alright?
Ghost: I don't think that he was meaning that to be an option.
Saladin:Just get going.
[With the House of Kings as your allies, you fight SIVA to the computer, before sending your Ghost into it, the Kings disappearing.]
Ghost: Don't you remember when we lit that array out? That would be the day our ship could leave Earth's orbit...without it, I would'nt think we accomplished what we accomplished, Guardian.
[Ghost finishes the computing, as the mission complete banner shows up,]
Ghost: I think we got coordinates to Efrideet's last known location. Saladin, we're ready to...
[You here a hideous scream, as SIVA start coming in, led by Saviks Perfected, Baron of Devils.]
Saviks: *grumbles Eliksni language*
Petra: Variks, get on the comms! What did he say?
Variks: He said...run, Guardiiiannnn, for you cannot escape your evolutionnnnn...
[You make a mad dash to the Forgotten Shore, SIVA swarming the complex.]
[You escape, as SIVA is dealt with all across the Cosmodrome.]
Saladin: SIVA was trying to take your information...whatever they were doing, they were stopped. Now...to find Efrideet.
[The true mission complete banner appears, as the mission is over.]
[spoiler]How'd you like it? You want part 2?[/spoiler]
[spoiler]Edit: Part 2 is up! [url]https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/213949759/0/0[/url][/spoiler]
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Why is Petra and Variks randomly in this?
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Edited by SeventhSeraph321: 9/28/2016 6:51:47 PMInteresting idea, but I'm not a fan of the fact that people will randomly get on the coms with you, like the Petra and variks part. It made sense why you had them there but lore wise they would be occupyied with other things, not waiting for you to need them, you know? The mission is very well written and put together, that's the only part that threw it off
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Why aren't you working for bungie?
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Edited by NoD Spartan: 9/29/2016 10:24:24 AMBungie should read this This is 10 times better than everything else what they make
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Not... Sure... How... I... Feel... About... All... The... Dot dot doting...
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That was pretty bad ass. Now to part 2.
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Great parts
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part 2 pls!!!!!!!!!!!! i really liked the second option, the house of kings is my fav house and i would love to fight alongside them!
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Ooooooooo. Savuthun confirmed?
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Good job man! Can the y3 necrochasm be infused with Siva. Red bullets, red glow?
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That was great man keep up the good work
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I like the second one more
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I love all of these ideas for new missions! Keep up the awesome work and let your imagination go wild! 😆
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Sure that was pretty good
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Good can't wait for part 2
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Edited by Grasp of Malok: 9/28/2016 4:49:34 AMNice. Terrestrial complex chase? 'Pulls out mida'