Pretty good video. Just a couple suggestions: -Make notes of what you want to say before you start -Go for a dry run before you record just to hear the sound of your own voice before you start -Intro and outro music is always helpful. It makes the video feel less jaunty -With these videos it's always helpul to have some gameplay of the weapon for newer players (this one is purely my opinion but it might help a little) -You could give suggestions on good weapon pairings for the armor pieces and class builds that match well These may make your video longer but you're starting from a good point so I don't see any detriment in it