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Dramamine (Story for the Flood)

[quote]So Flood, I am in the middle of writing four different stories right now, and I decided I'd share one, just to see what your reaction is.[/quote] One^1 The man walked through the hallways nobly, taking special attention to not upset the equilibrium of the glass of midnight serum, the milk, in his left hand, his right hand partaking in the job of balancing, with all of the grace of a blueblood. He made sure to avoid tripping over the obstacles of a slightly unkempt house, avoiding the obstructions of toys, clothes and household decorations that had been uprooted in the daytime calamity that had taken place earlier; the conflict between a five foot, eleven inch dragon and a four foot, three inch princess. A princess had rescued the knight, an eleven year old, seventy pound Irish Setter. The man let all of his thoughts give one collective sigh as he continued on his journey to the princesses' chamber. As he navigated through the hallways he noticed all of the decorations on the walls. Replicas of obscure paintings he did not remember buying, and the portraits of estranged family relations he did not remember framing. He passed through the ostentatious hallway without much more thought and opened approached the door to the chamber. He listened to the princess on the other side, as she sang to what must be a dolly in her hands, in the made-up language of the motherly. He gripped the doorknob and slowly opened the door to the halfway point, so as to not alert the princess of his presence immediately, he waited a few minutes before he threw himself with the entire flourish of a Prince, for a Prince he was. The princess was stopped in mid-coo, and gazed up from her bed and observed the stranger in her door for a moment in silence. Upon registering the stranger as no one else but the Prince himself, the corners of the girl's mouth shot upwards so quickly and forcefully she clung to her bed sheets to avoid blasting off to the moon in happiness. "Joey! Lookitmelookitme!" she screamed, before throwing herself on the floor and performing a lop-sided cartwheel. The Father sat down the milk on the bedside next to the princesses' bed and the Prince laughed and scooped her up to lay her in bed. The Father tucked her in and sat down next to her. "Now now, what do you know about bed time?" The Father questioned. The girl sat stumped, feigning anger at her Dad for throwing her back into bed. The girl threw her shoulders up in surrender. "Oh you know better than that! What do all princesses need to be strong and pretty?" he questioned again. "Sleep! Princesses need sleep!" she shouted excitedly. She waited another moment before asking again, "Bubut, aren't I already pretty!?" The Father laughed loudly and the Prince exclaimed, "You're the most beautiful princess in all of seven kingdoms of the world!" threw his hands up, and bowed to the girl flamboyantly. The princess laughed hysterical at her Prince and she drank the milk that her father had given her excitedly and fell back into bed. She pulled the sheets up to her eyeballs, as green as they were exposed, gazed at her Father. The Father kissed the girls forehead, ruffled her hair, and sat up off the bed. He walked to the door and turned off the light, telling the princess of his love for her, and the princess did the same for him. Satisfied, he closed the door and began the process of cleaning up the remnants of the epic dragon battle that had taken place earlier. He worked for an hour, resetting everything to its aesthetic locations, and sweeping the floor of the dry macaroni, which had served as the guts of the dragon. It was a work of love, all for the girl. When he was done, he sat himself in the living room Lay-Z-Boy and turned on the TV. His sports team was losing; his political party was gaining seats, his favorite show was being renewed for another season. He relaxed his eyes and let all of the entertainment come to him. There was nothing more for him to do with the day, and he felt no urge to change that. Exhausted, he was no longer the dragon, the Prince or even the Father. He was off the clock; he was now only Joel Lund. After a few hours of television, he fell asleep in his seat to the noise of his mind's pacing and the droning of a Proactiv commercial. ###### The Soldier marched dutifully through the sleet and mud, keeping his feet out of puddles and his eyes on what was in front of him as well as what was going on behind him. His head was locked in place, and he was determined to not fight. He looked at the trees which lined either side of the path all the soldiers were walking, black like the Ardennes, the Soldier became convinced he was in Germany. He kept his gun slung on his shoulder, in the masculine, accepted pose he watched his allies stride in. They were faceless projections of what he wanted them to be, he made no effort to incorporate himself with the men whose reasons for enlistment differed so greatly from his. They were pawns, and the Soldier viewed himself as a martyr, he was the one in control and it was only with his permission would his life be given. Even then, his life would be a contribution to only whomever he wished. His life was not for protecting the freedom of people hundreds of miles away, people who felt no more familiar to him than the enemy he was instructed to terminate. He groped his side for the pack on his thigh, searching for the papers he had strategically hid from his commanding officers. He had one objective; the mission was merely a transport, a vehicle for his own inclinations. His fingers found the impressed pulp fibers and their edges, and he patted them for extra security. He moved his hand back into marching position subtly, feeling watched the entire time. He would give these men no inch for them to pull him along, and kept all the slack for himself. They marched for many more miles. The Soldier watched the woods on either side of him transform from their snow-trimmed wholesomeness into victims of r­ape, tormented and contorted into shapes immediately more reminiscent of refugees than trees. The sky had melted from its grey indifference into a fire of orange and hatred. The Soldier continued thrust his shoulder in a semi-circular motion, reinforcing the sling on his breadth. He gripped the barrel with his palms, bringing its soulless opening into view, and keeping it pointed down without doubt. The officers, riding their horses in front of the platoons walked with more caution, a nervous stomp. The Soldier didn't like how the atmosphere and suddenly become so smothering. He looked to the treeline, gazing over the lords of the forest. He saw a villa, a small grouping of houses on a hill, overshadowed by a French château. The Soldier became convinced now he was in France. The officers stopped the platoons. The Soldier stopped with them. There was a hushed murmur amongst the soldiers, as they all speculated in low, unconvinced tones. The Soldier turned to speak to no one and discussed his thoughts in his head. The clouds in the sky conglomerated in the distance, and the hating orange sky turned to dark. The light from the sun no longer reached the shoulders, and still they sat illuminated. Heavenly rays poked through the clouds in giant amorphous blobs, highlighting selected sections of the men at random. The Soldier was convinced the light was not the sun, but something magic. The Soldier gripped the barrel of his gun more tightly, making sure that not for even a moment that his gun may be gone from his possession, he still had no need to fight, but the gun's presence made him feel more secure. The officers cried out in surprise to their troops to stop moving, to halt their activities, to keep quiet. The Soldier stepped back and swung his head nervously to all sides, gazing at the r­aped trees that leaned in closer to him, trying to whisper to him the regrets they had. The Soldier would not listen; he only dug his heels in and waited for the officers to give orders. The openings in the sky were beginning to shut, the swatches of light shrinking, stifling the people below in darkness. The Soldier sat unafraid, groping his gun and now his papers in his side pocket. The men around him grew grey and powerless and shifty, they looked around in fear as the landscape began to turn against them before their eyes. The trees contorted violently, stretching and reaching towards the soldiers as they huddled into piles of themselves helplessly. They had no reason to be afraid, there was no enemy, death was far away tending to other lands, but the Soldier felt that may have been the reason for their fear. The loneliness of the situation, it was a battlefield forming before their eyes, devoid of everything, including death. The mean readied their weapons and pointed into the sea of twisted limbs, ready to respond with violence when provoked with violence. The officers' horses had enough, and they revolted against their seated masters. They sprang up and shook off the men desperately, eager to gallop away from the forest of the damned. The officers stood up quickly to stifle their humiliation. The winds picked up, rattling the already restless tree limbs. The soldiers turned to men, disorganized and frightened for their lives, they began to lose order. The Soldier pulled out a cigarette, his hands were shaking badly. He steadied them with the support of his limbs, but found them turned to little earthquakes in his body. He stood in the center of the crowd of scared men, men with guns. The illumination that had blessed them earlier was now nearly completely gone, and a shadow was closing in all around the men of the infantry. The men shifted back and forth, each one desperately trying to weasel himself out of the edge of the circle, and climb his way near the spot the Soldier found himself in by good luck. The illumination from the sky now was gone completely, and everything was still. [Edited on 01.13.2011 2:32 PM PST]
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  • The Soldier saw a path leading up the hill to the villa ahead of him, not nearly twenty yards ahead of him. The Soldier saw the magnificent stone walls that served as the fortifications for this European town lavished in all of the flourishes of Italian Renaissance architecture, and the Soldier was convinced he was in Italy. He was now a minor sprint away from the entrance, from relative safety. He gave himself a moment and looked behind him, he saw the beings swarmed behind him in the dozens, the fire consuming the wake of their predatory chase, with the resurrected men being burned alive in the hellish blaze. The sky had switched to crimson, letting light through in large pockets, pockets which exploded the beings almost instantaneously, leaving only questionable smog. The Soldier gazed back at the entrance of the fortifications and watched the impressive double-reinforced wood door begin to open, and the Soldier saw the cannons lining the top walls, preparing to fire. The Soldier cried out to fire! fire the cannons, for God's sake? what are you even waiting for? fire! The Soldier reached the double wooden door and heard the cannons fire behind him, and felt their artillery burst into the ground, leaving craters where demons once stood. The Soldier heard the whines of pain from behind him, loud shrieking sounds, before he felt the smooth wooden stock of a rifle smack into the back of his head. One^2 Seven o' clock the next morning, Joel woke up, ready to start the day again. He still had one more day with Susannah and he wanted to be happy during it. He threw himself off the recliner and moved towards the kitchen to start on breakfast, eggs and bacon. He turned on the stereo by the stove and listened to CCR while preparing the food. He worked without saying a word until he heard the familiar sound of light-footed walking coming from down the hallway and turned to see is little girl yawning and walking towards the kitchen table lethargically. She hugged her father's leg and said goodmorning, which he courteously returned as she plopped herself down on the wooden seat at the wooden table. Sammy finished cooking the food and arranged it pleasantly on the plate, in the shape of scrambled eyes and a meaty smile, and set it down in front of Susannah and fixed most of the rest of the helpings for himself. He poured another glass of milk for the girl and pulled out a small carton of orange juice for himself. He sat down with his food and ate patiently, watching the girl eat everything on her plate, making sure she finished her milk. He paced himself so they would finish at the same time, and took their plates when they were done. "You can watch TV for a bit if you want, Suze," he said in between applications of elbow grease onto the dishes. "That's okay Joey, I'll wait," the little girl said while swinging her legs from the dining chair absentmindedly. They sat together in silence, working on whatever projects they had. Words weren't necessary for the two of them to know what the other was thinking about. Joel knew Susannah missed her father. Joel could pretend to be anything he wanted to his little sister, but he knew he couldn't replace years of evolving biology. The little girl knew Joey was thinking about having to take her back, and she felt the four year old foundations of guilt in her belly, and wondered why she felt that way. Doogie, the seventy pound "dragon" forced his way into the kitchen, half-awake but too half-dead to even care, lying at first on his stomach, letting the linoleum cool himself down, before rolling on his back and kicking his feet into the air, inviting anyone to come and pet him. Begging, anyone to touch him in any way, eleven years had done nothing to satiate his need to be an attention whore. Susannah giggled at the sight of him rolling on his back, letting his tongue hang out the side of his mouth, and his floppy cheeks peeling backwards and his neck skin drooping in every direction. "Doogie looks like an old person Joey!" Susannah yelled loudly between her giggles. Joey looked downwards from the dishes and saw that miserable old dog stretching out on his back, his big old ears extended as far as they could go, and his floppy cheeks made his face look like a deranged grin on his face, he looked like a rabid bunny with a gland issue. "Well look at that! He looks like a funny bunny to me from up here!" Susannah thought this over for a moment before deciding it was the funniest thing anyone could have ever said to her, she screamed loudly and laughed, "Funny bunny! Funny bunny!" Joel finished the dishes and turned on the TV for Susannah, he handed her the remote, asking her if she remembered how to use the television at his house, she smiled and nodded telling him she remembered. He told her good, and returned the smile. He told her he was going to go take a shower and he'd be out in fifteen minutes, but to just knock if she needed anything. She told him okay before seeking out Dora the Explorer on the early morning kid's shows. Joel went upstairs to his room and pulled out a towel from his dresser and went to the master bathroom next to his bedroom, he closed the door and turned on the faucet. He sat down on the lid of the toilet waiting for the water to warm-up and put his face in his hands, trying to keep himself awake and fight off the sleepiness that had invited itself in place of the extra hours and night he would have rather had. He thought of what he would do with Susannah today, anything to keep his mind off of thinking about giving her up tomorrow. The water pounded the tile floor of the shower, and drops of water ricocheted off the surfaces and sprinkled the adjacent side of Joel's arm, its cold temperatures initially contrasting with the warm, humid air of the bathroom. Joel moved off the toilet and straightened his back, standing at his full six feet, and jumped into the shower fully clothed. Warm jeans, raggedy t-shirt, old boxers and thinning socks swelled and doubled in weight as they invited in the water. Joel felt like the creature from the Black Lagoon, a monster suffocating in its own excesses and filth. He stood for another moment and bowed his head downwards, bringing his hand to pull his hair back, as he blew out the water around his mouth with hardly any enthusiasm. For a moment, he wished he would drown now, so he didn't have to deal with being alive anymore. Death seemed more approachable in times of exhaustion. He closed his eyes to the half-way point and stood like a somnambulist doing their best to imitate consciousness. He swayed side to side to wake himself up, and felt the day would never feel like it had actually happened today. Joel took off his soaked clothes and took a shower normally. Two^1 Joel walked downstairs and found Susannah playing with the unplugged toaster; inserting bread, removing the bread, inserting the bread upside down, removing upside down bread, inserting multiple slices, reaching her hand in to pull out multiple slices that had globbed together and jammed the toaster, and repeating it all ceremoniously. Doogie just sat with his head on his paws, uninterested in the toaster and instead more interested in observing an ant crawling in circles on the linoleum. "Susannah?" "Hm," was the response, more statement than it was a question. "What are you doing kiddo?" "Hm?" this time a serious question was attempted. "With the toaster, what are you doing? Is it off? Don't stick your hand in there, why is there crushed bread stuffed at the bottom of the toaster? What happened to the loaf of bread I had out?" The questions came out a little more fluidly and more as authority than Joel was comfortable with. "What?" Susannah seemed not to be connecting with any of the conversation at all. "Susannah!" Joel shot out, trying to coax the little girl's attention. Susannah turned her head lazily, her eyes focusing still on the toaster; Doogie raised his head to see what the commotion was, before laying it back down and lazily scooping up the ant he had been watching with his still remarkably flexible tongue. "What!" Susannah yelled back. Joel walked over and took her hand out of the toaster and removed the bread that was still only cooking with its own sense of embarrassment. "You don't need to play with the toaster Susannah, it's not a toy, and it makes food. Toys don't make food." Joel tried not to smile as he observed the toaster did look kind of fun to play with. "My Easy Bake makes food! And it's a toy!" Susannah responded after only a little effort in thought. Joel wasn't surprised she was contesting his definition of toy, his argument wasn't particularly bulletproof. "Alright fine, toys can make food, but then this is my toy, it could hurt you if you used it, or you could hurt it. Why in the world would you even want to play with a toaster anyways? I still have all of your toys here in the closet from your last visit." Susannah wasn't very old, and besides the emotions of anger, hunger and happiness, she wasn't able to communicate her feelings well. That didn't seem to stop her from putting forth the extra effort to her best impression of someone who has just been deeply offended. "Joey those toys are for babies!" she yelled in her best angry voice, which was more like a squeakier version of happy. Joel had to bit his lip quickly to keep from laughing at the little girl, he could see in her face she was deeply serious, and he knew how quickly he could disturb the situation by spiting her. [Edited on 01.13.2011 2:34 PM PST]

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