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8/17/2008 3:13:57 AM
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My Halo Fanfic.

Halo: Celestial Hymn The Celestial Hymn exited from slipspace. The stars and planets reappeared and filled the inky backdrop of space. And, not for the first time, shipmaster Hyco Borul’ee became lost in the beauty of the heavens. The Celestial Hymn was a Cruiser class warship, armed with five plasma turrets and two laterally facing pulse cannons. Borul’ee had certainly earned his rank and this ship, due to the fact he was born into a poor and unrecognized family, and to the Elites, nobility was a key deciding factor in the social and economical castes. He had wished all of his life to be in the Covenant Navy, and now his dream was complete. He had been given this ship a few years ago, and he was growing much attached to it. He adored its ability to remain extremely maneuverable, even when under heavy fire. But, one thing troubled him; his old crew of experienced veterans had been replaced when they were called to go join the other Covenant ships assaulting the newly found Human colonies. It had been almost a year since the events at Harvest, and now the highest rank on his ship was a only a Minor Domo Borul’ee had been tasked with locating new Forerunner structures, and this new system looked very promising. Already, the Luminary was picking up many suitable areas of interest. The planet below the cruiser was covered in dense forests and some small oceans. Borul’ee was preparing to initiate entry vectors when a blip appeared on the ship’s radar. He recognized the blips as Human interceptors and one Halycon class cruiser. Borul’ee cursed; he realized that the planet below must be a human colony. His cruiser lacked any Seraphs, and the human cruiser must have a MAC gun on board. He had heard stories of the MAC guns blasting through a cruiser’s energy shields and gutting the whole warship. But, Borul’ee wouldn’t give up without a fight. *** Tell me what you think, if this becomes popular, I'll post more of it. :)
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] The Stig 11993 [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Dr Acula Great, but wrong forum.[/quote] Right forum, and it's pretty decent[/quote] Ok, get off my back people.
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  • That was really good.
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  • Good job. [url=http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=4213151&chapter=1]Mine.[/url] [url=http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=4424876&chapter=1]Nemero Dos.[/url] [url=http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=4385422&chapter=1]And...[/url] First is the best, and the most canon. [Edited on 08.16.2008 7:37 PM PDT]
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  • tl:dr no, seriously, pretty good. 4/5
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Dr Acula Great, but wrong forum.[/quote] Right forum, and it's pretty decent [Edited on 08.16.2008 7:35 PM PDT]
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  • Nice! It's means it is. Due to it’s isolation. = Due to it is Isolation. That's a Grammer Error. But that dosen't Concern me. Keep at it!
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  • Looks promising. BTW I updated mine. Keep it up!
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  • Well, since the response has been so good, I'll post part two (it's not finished yet, so mind any typos). Spartan II Austin 049 had been administrating a training exercise with some Marines over the planet Cardiff when a Covenant ship had exited from Slipspace. The planet was the perfect place to run such exercises, due to it’s isolation from other Human colonies, but out here, the possibility of Covenant attack was very real. The Cruiser was large and majestic. For a brief moment, Austin gazed upon the ship with awe and wonder. Then, his training kicked in. Having being trained in combat since the age of six, he knew all the possible attack formations that would be useful in such an encounter. He got the Longsword class fighters into position and began the assault. He then ordered the Halycon- cruiser “Home Free” to charge its MAC cannon. MAC cannons were an ingenious device. They fired solid metal shells the size of a car at supersonic speeds using magnets, so hence the name, Magnetic Accelerator Cannon. Austin knew it was one of the few human weapons that could penetrate a Covenant ship’s energy shield, the advanced device that protected the entire hull from damage. It would be a few minutes until the MAC gun was ready to fire, so Austin had to hold out until then...
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Dr Acula Great, but wrong forum.[/quote] We don't Care. This is one of the best Fan-Fics I've seen in a while.
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  • China called they want their wall back
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Dr Acula Great, but wrong forum.[/quote] Right forum. Look at the pinned topics. [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=11663449]The Flood Library v2[/url] [quote]The library is where you can find many works of fiction and art relating to the Flood forum, Halo, Bungie Stuff. This is user submitted, and is designed so that members works are not lost. Submit your works today because I am not going to try and find them.[/quote] : ) [Edited on 08.16.2008 7:19 PM PDT]
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  • Great, but wrong forum.
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  • Epic Win
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