Below is a short chunk of a Fanfic Im working on. I just want to get some feedback. If you're a fan of the lore.
EDIT: I stayed up all night and worked on some new content for you guys. Let me take a moment though to thanks all of you guys who read my little piece of Destiny lore. I never expected such a positive reaction to my writing. You guys really warmed my heart. Unfortunately the update has too many characters to post here- so I've added a link to a website that has the updated tale in a format that's easier to read. But be sure to review the whole thing again because ive implemented a lot a changes and improvements. Please let me know if anything feels too bloated now. I hope you enjoy what I've added.
Click [url=http://www.wattpad.com/65492718-high-orbit-path-to-a-legand-high-orbit-path-of-a?utm_source=web&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&ref_id=33887937]HERE[/url] to continue the Journey.
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Excellent job! Speaking from the perspective of someone who adamantly reads SciFi and Fantasy novels you have a lot of talent. There is also much potential in your short, but elegant prose. I personally enjoyed it very much and can't wait for your next part! Additionally, I think you ought to work with Bungie (perhaps they can assist you with its development) and Kindle Direct Publishing from Amazon (I'm thinking they could assist you with editing, publishing, copyrighting etc.) IMHO, because I definitely think your work should be published.