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Edited by Stark: 10/19/2013 9:13:56 PM
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Destiny Beta-Key Contest/Giveaway

Hello Destiny community and good day to you. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Beta Winner!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mr Midas congratulations! Through the blessing of The Traveler I have been blessed with an extra Beta Key that I plan on give out to one lucky guardian. Long Story short I got one in an email from my pre order provider after I had gone in and got my printed receipt beta code. I have checked and the two codes are different and unique from each other. I now plan on passing the extra spoils onto you, the Destiny community through a simple contest. Contest: The winner will be chosen at random, to be entered into the drawing you need to do three simple things. 1. Follow Me 2. Post a "positive criticism" post on my current story chapters. Spam and troll post will be disregarded and will not be counted as a post. 3. And finally for a little extra incentive, I would like you to write a short story describing a character of your choice, preferable human. I say human because we know very little about the other races. I say this also because the winner will also have their character featured in my next and upcoming chapter and if they are a human it makes it much easier for me to write them in. The dead line for the Beta Key will be Sunday 8pm Central Time. One week from this Post. Chapter One: http://www.bungie.net/7_Tale-of-Two-Strangers-Fan-Fic/en/Forum/Post?id=61670966#referred-Destiny (Destiny) Chapter Two: http://www.bungie.net/7_ToTS-Chapter-2-Fates-Intertwined/en/Forum/Post?id=61724763#referred-Destiny (Destiny) Chapter Three: http://www.bungie.net/7_Tale-of-Two-Strangers-Fan-Fic/en/Forum/Post?id=61670966#referred-Destiny (Destiny) Chapter Four: http://www.bungie.net/7_ToTS-Chapter-Four-Friend-or-Foe/en/Forum/Post?id=61922275#referred-Destiny (Destiny) Chapter Five: http://www.bungie.net/7_ToTS-Chapter-5-Ghostly-Past/en/Groups/Post?id=62147025&groupId=39972#referred- Here are the links to all my chapters so far, have fun and good luck to everyone. Edit* Since some people "need" some clarification for the purpose of my three steps I will give them. 1. Following allows you to more easily find my post and threads. After the give away you will have no need to follow me any further and may un-follow. 2. I would much appreciate other people's comments on my chapters thus far so that I may improving them further as the story un folds. 3. I've wanted to do something of this kind for my stories for some time now. What better way then in a contest, kill two birds with one stone. Doing it this way does more for the Destiny community the just doing a free for all, first come first serve. Those who really want to get into the beta will put forth the little bit of effort I am asking for. Doing it this way I feel levels the playing field for everyone.

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  • [spoiler]I love your story DHG Stark. Lily is a special one and I can't think of no one better that Stark to take care of her. Other that the small grammatical errors, I would like to see some more descriptive details on the settings and some of the people( like the hothead Paige) Keep up the good work!😃[/spoiler] Short Story The Traveler. The white orb in the sky that watches over the denizens of the last stronghold on Earth. The sun nor the moon could never come close to the mysterious ball. And yet, Alice starred far beyond the Travelver at the setting sun. Her mind was in a frenzy as she recalled the day's events, especially her conversation with the Commander.[i]This mission had been ordered by the Council themselves and they expect you and your father to get it done.[/i]she replayed the statement in her mind like a recording.[i]Why would the Council choose my father and I when there are others better suited?[/i]She turned away from the window to face the mirror in front of her. She starred at the girl in the mirror. She is very pretty with her long chestnut hair, warped ever so carefully together into a braid that rested on her chest. Her small facial features were highlighted by her pale complexion. And her cerulean eyes that could instantly make anyone nervous. She was slightly taller that her fellow guardians with a beautiful body to match, which got her all the looks from the men. Just like her mother and father. [i]Father.[/i]Her father was nothing like her. While she spent her time studying and educating herself, her father allowed for his career to dip into a downward spiral. Once, she looked up to him as the perfect example of what a guardian should be, but he doesn't act like one. She had to support herself and yet, her father spends the profits on cheap alcohol. His life of bounty hunting and disrespectful attitude has gotten a bad reputation, but he gets the job done. Years of strict discipline has turned her into the kind of person she is proud of.[i]Smart, friendly,willing,courageo-[/i] [i]Voooommm!![/i]The engines of a low flying vessel broke Slice out of her deep meditation. She quickly got to her feet and began fumbling around her dormitory for her hooded robe. She would it when crossing into the bad part of town, especially because of her natural beauty and the curse that it always brought along. She would her wear her newly polished armor, but she would get to far without someone trying to kill her for it. Alice her trusty hand cannon ,[i]Great Expectations[/i], and placed it in it's respective holster. She quickly put on the robe with relative ease and turned around to face the mirror one last time.[i]Father might not be ready for a mission like this, but I am.[/i]she thought to herself. She walked out the door and began the walk to the nearest elevator. A small, confident smile started forming on her lips as the door[/url] behind her hissed it's usual farewell [i]Be Brave.[/i]

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