JavaScript is required to use Bungie.net

Destiny

Discuss all things Destiny.
Edited by GMoneyChuck: 3/30/2013 1:13:34 AM
31

NEW DESTINY FAN FICTION. If anybody wants to read.

Hey, Guys! So, I wrote this Destiny Fan Fiction in a few hours and decided to share it with you all. I hope you guys enjoy. Of course, bungie owns all of this. I do not. Its filled with a bit of speculation, but you get the basic gist of it. Thanks guys!

Posting in language:

 

Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

  • Moar plz. But with space flight and guns and stuff. Lol. Maybe Merric can have his first encounter with a Fallen or something. I really don't care, I just love Destiny related stories :)

    Posting in language:

     

    Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

  • Moar ty.

    Posting in language:

     

    Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

  • Edited by ColCaboose: 5/31/2014 4:14:47 PM
    Very well written and thought out. Love how you weave those delicious details into the rest of the scene. If I may make one small suggestion, I think the part where you say "his training quickly kicked in" could be mentioned a bit differently to better fit the environment he is in. That line seems like it would precede actual combat. Great job! I really love it.

    Posting in language:

     

    Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

  • Friendly bump from a StarSide Echoes clan member. Bumpage in response to the attack from #offtopic the flood http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post?id=63657470

    Posting in language:

     

    Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

  • Love it! And I would certainly read more should you be inclined to do so.

    Posting in language:

     

    Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

  • Just finished reading your story and, while it's a little bit more serious than my style, I still loved it. Do you have a profile on FanFiction that I can follow, or are you strictly on Google?

    Posting in language:

     

    Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

  • hmm i wonder when FF.net will add Destiny

    Posting in language:

     

    Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

    11 Replies
    • I just posted part 4 of mine, and it's been getting fairly positive support, if you would like to read it, let me know or head over to the thread!: http://www.bungie.net/en-us/Forum/Post?id=60129989

      Posting in language:

       

      Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

      1 Reply
      • Nobody has bothered to read my fan-fics. Would any of you like to have a gander at such pieces of work?

        Posting in language:

         

        Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

        21 Replies
        • I liked yours so I decided to write my own. Tell me if you would like to read it, it's not erotic unfortunately. Be forewarned, it's probably full of grammatical and spelling errors and I don't have the greatest understanding of imagery, my vocabulary is a bit limited.

          Posting in language:

           

          Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

          1 Reply
          • now i will make a fan story :3 thank you for inspiring me

            Posting in language:

             

            Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

          • Very nice story. You should check out Flamerets and I's fan fiction.

            Posting in language:

             

            Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

          • ★★★★★

            Posting in language:

             

            Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

            2 Replies
            • Edited by externalmemory: 3/31/2013 4:13:57 AM
              1
              externalmemory
              externalmemory

              no. - old

              Okay, real quick critique: You're fine with the descriptions and imagining a setting and the little bits and details to flesh out the world, stuff like the metal table / high-tech stovetop; I'd keep thinking up more stuff on the side and save those fun bits for fleshing out more later. All the combination of mythic sci-fi / idealized reality. Think how this stuff might work from the perspective of someone living in the time that would take it for granted that it just does, but with a loose understanding of how it does. Think about this, though; I feel like the whole introduction to Destiny's universe and basic plot/background is just being revealed in one long and almost pedantic near-monologue this warlock "mansplaining" everything to the titan with very little back and forth or any mystery. The rest is all description and no exposition. There are some opportunities to reveal what the world's about without having to rely so heavy handed on dialogue; you don't even mention the Traveler in the sky above this market the Titan walks through or what he thinks about it given what he does and doesn't know about being sent out into the abyss, whether to explore or invade. So, I'd think about getting us inside the Titan's head and the setting first a bit more before introducing us to this know-it-all, and try to give him more of a unique perspective than simply a would-be narrator. But keep giving readers more of the fantasy mixed with sci fi; what if the armor and gauntlets and other pieces of gear they wear have modern-inspired names and functioning as well? What do the kettles look like? Are there composite metals and materials other than silver that would last longer to wear and tear and be more functional?

              Posting in language:

               

              Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

              2 Replies
              • Considering what little we know, good job on working with your own concepts. I liked it, but there is [i]always[/i] room for improvement within your own writing. Keep it up.

                Posting in language:

                 

                Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

              • Very well done, sir. Pretty nice read if I do say so myself.

                Posting in language:

                 

                Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

              • Nice job dude, I think this work is really well done. The one peice of feedback I have is that the titan comes of as sort of... dull. From his clumsiness walking down the street to his stammering and obvious subordinacy with the warlock, he makes me feel hard-pressed to imagine him as a capable and cunning warrior off of Earth. Anyways, just one peice of comstructive criticism. So far so good :)

                Posting in language:

                 

                Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

              • Man, that was awesome. A sense of impending adventure and danger, and it was sort of a plus that the knowledge aesop fits in with my own ideals. Sorta was expecting the Warlock to do something for the evulz, so I was pretty happy that he didn't. That would've been stupid. Took forever for me to get around to reading this.

                Posting in language:

                 

                Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

              • That was incredible. Keep making them as the game is talked about. Awesome job for a game we hardly know about.

                Posting in language:

                 

                Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

              • 0
                Very well done man, Keep on writing. I hope to see more not only from you, but the other writers amongst the community.

                Posting in language:

                 

                Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

              • Edited by Mustang: 3/30/2013 9:51:23 PM
                That was very well written. As a person who has spent 13 years reading thousands of books I find it very hard to find fanfiction that piques my interest anymore. You however, have managed to enthrall me in such a short amount of time and leave me wanting for more. For that, I applaud you. Now please, give me more~

                Posting in language:

                 

                Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

              • That was awesome man.

                Posting in language:

                 

                Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

              • Edited by Flamerets: 3/30/2013 7:59:02 AM
                I have been writing one for a bit, checking the date my first "chapter" was released Feb. 22. Just haven't published it outside of the NM. So, I'm with Vien Quitonmee in that regard; would anyone like to take a look? Don't worry, it is not erotic. EDIT: Also, a good read!

                Posting in language:

                 

                Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

                2 Replies
                • It was pretty good, don't get me wrong, but don't you think it's a bit early to be writing fan stories? We know extremely little about the game as it is.

                  Posting in language:

                   

                  Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

                  1 Reply
                  • Me too ..Will read yours...humm seems the Gallery is kinda getting dusty.*Gets Duster, Coughing a few times.*

                    Posting in language:

                     

                    Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

                  • Very nice, Fan fictions will be bursting on the scene when Bungie releases more info on the lore, and the Traveler. I hope to see more from you when we get some fresh news from Bungie's writers

                    Posting in language:

                     

                    Play nice. Take a minute to review our Code of Conduct before submitting your post. Cancel Edit Create Fireteam Post

                  You are not allowed to view this content.
                  ;
                  preload icon
                  preload icon
                  preload icon