Not diary form please. Journal form is much better. "Dear Diary, I found more evidence of the rake" "I found more evidence of the rake" The Rake also resembles the Pale man. The Pale man was an old blind fisherman who was murdered by a gang. He came back from the dead with eyes in his hands so he could see those who killed him, and enact his revenge, by eating those who took his life. The movie Pan's Labyrinth features this figure. What drives such evil? what motivates a Rake?