That was rather painful to read.It was littered with grammar mistakes.Flood is capitalized.Why exactly would the Humans need the Elites help to create another Spartan?Not enough description language.What kind of Flood was it?What armor was Mike and "Icka" wearing?What color?What were their features?His hair color?Age?Race? The sentence structure was terrible.You forgot a few full stops.Over all I would rate it a 3/10.