Awesome! That was just….Freakin awesome! This Story seemed a bit shorter but that might just be me. Nice non-stop action Corbic. Once I started reading that last chapter, I just couldn’t stop. As pyroshark said “One final, brilliant showdown.”(The Keyword being Brilliant). Sorry I have been off a lot lately. Been a bit busy and haven’t had more than 5 minutes to get on. Hopefully the group systems will be back on soon because that’s one of the main reasons I come here (besides Corbic stories). I might start reading your new story “Death Games “ but it all depends how much time I can devote to bungie.net Sally’s Dead, OMFG(I don’t say that often)!