[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] ElementalRunner [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] The Holy Taco Right now your story is basically a retelling of St. Hubertus, and it's a story that I feel doesn't need to be retold again unless you have something more to offer.[/quote] Ah okay. I have no idea what St. Hubertus is, but that doesn't really matter I guess. I wasn't inspired by outside work to write this, but I guess that doesn't matter either. Eh I guess I do have to think about this stuff.[/quote]The story that you are telling is already a part of our culture. St. Hubertus had a similar experience so perhaps you should read his story.