11/29/2015 5:59:46 AM

roxipoxi

Could you guys look at this?

I'm working on this as a personal thing and wanted people to see it. How is it?

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#Offtopic #writing #godofvodkaandskittles #plzdonthurtme

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11/29/2015 6:37:51 AM

burger3331

I thinks it amazing. Best sleeping tablet I ever had. You should mass produce it!!

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11/29/2015 6:08:03 AM

M1Silencer

Work on reducing the use of short sentences. Seems kind of choppy.

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11/29/2015 6:01:24 AM

LibertarianCajun

Eh, what's it for?

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