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Edited by D3athAndR3birth: 5/17/2015 10:22:41 PM
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Making a Dent Part I (From the author of What the Speaker Didn't Say and other stuff from last year)

Hey folks, I'm not really sure why I took a long hiatus from writing fan fiction, probably working full time, marriage, a child, and trying to get that sweet, sweet loot, but it has been too long. To celebrate the release of House of Wolves, I figured I'd lead up to it with a piece about everyone's favorite Titan who killed a Kell with nothing but his head. As always, please let me know what you think, criticism, and what you'd like to see in the future. Most importantly, thank you for reading this wall of text. Also, now there's a part two: https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/122124663 Shock rounds crackled through the air; explosions in the distance echoed in the chests of all present; the screams of the dying filled the gaps with a cacophony of Human, Awoken, Fallen, and even the distortion of malfunctioning Exo voices; and somewhere in the midst of it all a singular voice tried to be heard by the Guardians present. The chaos was in the shadow of a massive wall standing forty feet tall, one made from relic iron, scrap metal, debris from the Collapse, and necessity. Husks of ancient buildings stood with the warriors; though, they were squat, sunk into the ground, and more rubble than any actual form. Thousands battled on every side of the City, all hoping their fight wasn’t in vain, that the enemy hadn’t already punched through one of the other walls. The order of the Chain held the waves to the North and Northwest, led by their field commander Saint-14. He fought alongside his men, just as any Titan would; yet, he was almost completely indistinguishable from the masses. His bulky form was only added to by gray armor, metal over metal. There was nothing ornate to him; even his helmet was the listless gray with only a line of purple light that provided all the visual data his synthetic mind needed. His armor may have had more Fallen blood and ether painting it and his enemies may have given him more breadth, fearing a prowess they recognized, but there was nothing else discernable about the Exo. Saint-14 was never known to yell; his voice always remained impassive, if not ambivalent, to any factors. Instead, that seemingly callous voice just spoke louder, as loud as needed especially to be heard over the waging of war. “Repeat. I could not read you. Repeat.” He had been looking down in thought, speaking into his helmet’s radio, during a rare lull in combat. His gaze drifted up just in time to see a shock blade, charged with the same arc energy as almost all Fallen weapons, being thrust towards his chest. Instinctively, the Exo grabbed the hand wielding the blade and crushed bone in his grip. The yell of pain registered as a dreg’s voice as Saint-14’s other hand whipped around in a fist for a haymaker that simultaneously crushed in the creature’s ocular socket and snapped its neck. The dreg dropped in a heap at the Guardian’s feet and Saint stared at it while listening closely to any incoming communications. “-retreat, sir. I repeat: The Devils are in retreat!” He had noted a thinning of the legions pressing the line and actually felt a faint grin play across his metallic lips. “Which front, soldier?” Laughter filled the other end of the comm and, wherever the scout was, it sounded like there were people cheering in the background. “All of them, sir! All six fronts are retreating! Looks like they’re peeling off in their dropships, yellow bastards!” Saint-14 looked up and scanned the battle. Fighting had all but ended at the wall; most of the Guardians were cheering or helping one another back to the wall. He could see Fallen running towards the safety of the Cosmodrome; though, any lagging behind received bullets in their spines from the snipers perched on the wall. Every communication frequency was filled with joyous outbursts and it was warranted; they had passed the first test of survival since the Collapse and since the City had been founded. There was no time for it. “Guardians, clear the lines now.” He paused for a moment as silence began to filter into his audio. He even saw some Titans nearby turn to stare at him. “Has anyone confirmed the Ketch taking off?” The scout’s voice responded in a softer, slightly worried tone, “N-no sir; last seen, it landed in the old Cosmodrome near King’s Watch.” “All members of the Chain, form up immediately at Karmakshy; we press forward in five minutes.” Saint-14 unholstered his assault rifle and began to jog away from the wall, stepping on the bodies of the Fallen and carefully around the bodies of his fallen Guardian brethren. His subordinates began to move towards him, three already falling in line behind. “Belay that order.” Lord Shaxx’s voice belted over all the communications at a volume high enough to make the humans and Awoken flinch all across the City. “Belay. There will be no counter attack. Fall back to the Wall. Reinforce the wall.” All of the Chain’s guardians stopped where they were, confused at the dissention in the chain of command. Saint was their commander, but Shaxx? Shaxx led all of the regiments. He only answered to the Speaker and the Traveler; though, even that was questionable. Saint-14 stood still as well, still listening to the cheering in the background. “Ghost, a line directly to Shaxx. Private.” After a split second of his companion’s work, the Exo continued, “Sir, the Devils are in retreat. If their Ketch is still grounded, this is our opportunity to cut off the head. Request permission to proceed to kill Trykais.” “Denied. All units return to the Wall.” “Sir, permission then for a small-” Shaxx responded sharply, “Permission denied, Titan. Get your men back to the Wall immediately. You have your orders.”

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  • And the rest of part one, yay! Saint-14 stood still for a moment longer, letting the possibilities flit through his processors. His Ghost asked something, even a Titan near him asked something, but they were ignored outright. There was a probability to run. Maximize positive outcome, minimize casualties, minimize subordinates disciplined… He said quietly under his breath, “Five, at most six…” He turned and stared at the three Titans close behind him, still ignoring anything that had been said. “Vell, Krace, Yvette, you have your orders from Lord Shaxx; you can return to the Wall. It’s that or ready your weapons and grab as much ammo on the way as you can carry.” He turned away and started walking again as if nothing had changed. “And find me a Warlock.” “A Praxic, sir?” Krace came jogging up along his field commander. The fellow Titan was young, too young for the preference of most. That could have been the reason for his audacious blood red armor and the Mandarin symbols for God of War painted on his chest. He was too ambitious, too ready for a war, and surprisingly perfect for what his commander intended. Saint’s brow furrowed even though no one could see it. “By the Traveler, no. I need a Voidwalker. If anything, I need Ikora Rey before she started working with Shaxx.” “I know of an Awoken.” The maroon and black Titan strode up to his leader’s opposite side, keeping pace. His voice was even like Saint’s, but human. Vell Tarlowe was known as the Messenger; though, he had never had a position that would suggest such. The middle-aged man had been on sixty-three expeditions since the City’s founding; he was the sole survivor on fifteen of them and the Messenger who brought back the news each time. It had caused a level of detachment that rivaled that of the most antisocial Exos. “Unreliable to say the least. Doesn’t use his own name; says it’s only for the Reef to know.” Yvette, an Awoken herself, jogged up beside Vell and replied, “First or second generation then, names don’t really matter though, do they? Can he kill some tā mā de Fallen?” They could all hear the smile in her voice. Her green armor was particularly stained in ether, showing her penchant for hand to hand combat. “Not like you, but he’s killed many over my shoulder over the years.” Vell turned his head to Saint-14 for approval. The Exo never broke stride, never turned away from his path. “Open a direct line to him through your Ghost; we do not need to broadcast our plans.” Vell moved his hand to his helmet and fell back a step to contact the Warlock without disturbing the others. There was a moment of quiet among the group, an understanding as to what they were about to attempt. That moment was broken for Saint-14 as his Ghost piped up, “Sir, you have a direct communication coming from the Wall.” “From who Ghost?” “It appears to be from a fellow Exo, goes by… Cayde-5, a Hunter I believe, sir.” The Ghost materialized in front of its companion, moving at speed. “Should I patch him through?” “Go ahead.” A loud, over-eager voice filled Saint-14’s helmet, “Hey there Commander Saint, sir. This is Cayde-5, I-” Saint turned the volume down slightly with a quick hand gesture to his Ghost and cut off the other, “My Ghost already told me who you are, Hunter. What do you need?” There was an accent to the voice that responded, as if the Hunter had been programmed to harken back to pre-Golden age dialects. “Well sir, I heard your order and I heard Lord Shaxx’s order. Seems to me that all of the Chain members are heading back here, helping each other or cheering. Then, can you guess my surprise when I see four Titans, in my scope, heading exactly where you said to rendezvous. My Ghost confirmed that it was you for me.” Saint’s jaw tightened. They needed a head start before anyone at the City noticed; they needed time. “Where are you going with this, Cayde?” The same accent responded very quietly, “You’re off to kill some Fallen, aren’t you?” “And if we are? Going to report to Shaxx?” Saint could feel his hand tighten around the grip of his rifle, readying the order to sprint if need be. “I’d really prefer not; no, I want to come shoot some húndàn with you.” There was a laugh on the line as the field commander thought. “I do not seem to have a choice, do I? If you can steal away without being missed, you can provide cover.” Back at the Wall, Cayde-5 pulled away from his scope and said in disgust, “Provide cover? That’s it? Come on, you’ll need more than that.” When there was only silence on the other end, the Hunter looked back into his scope and said, “Fine, but honestly, how the hell am I going to see you people in a group of Fallen? Aside from Mr. Gaudy Blood Red there, if you get mobbed, I won’t know where to shoot. You know how much of a pìgu I’ll feel like if I shoot a Dreg and end up downing one of you all too?” There was no response, but Cayde watched the group move in his scope. Saint-14 pointed into some rubble and the four jogged to it. They began sifting through the ruins of a building, finding pieces of Frames, furniture, and even a skeleton in the rocks. The group seemed to pull four poles out of the debris with something on them. From the angle, the Hunter couldn’t initially tell what they were. Saint then borrowed Yvette’s fusion rifle, snapped one of the poles apart, and fired the rifle. “What in the Traveler’s Light is he…” Cayde looked up from his scope again to glace at his Ghost, which did its best to make a shrug. He sighed and put his eye to the scope again and let his jaw go slack as he realized what was happening. The Hunter watched Saint lift the broken end of a broom above his head, tip melted by the gun, and jam it into the top of his helmet until it cooled and hardened. Saint-14’s calm voice answered back, “This should be sufficient.” Thank you again so much for your time!

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