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Edited by D3athAndR3birth: 5/17/2015 10:15:58 PM
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Making a Dent Part II (Saint-14/Fallen Fiction)

Alright folks, my wife and son are out of town this weekend, so I sat down to write some. Not entirely sure how, but I managed to bang out an entire second part in one sitting, so the editing might not be as good as normal; I was really excited to get more of this out there. As usual, please let me know what you think, positive or negative, and thank you for reading. If you didn't read part one, its here: https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/120935319/0/0 The four Titans jogged along what had once been a road. Concrete and tar had broken over the centuries, giving way to nature. Trees stood tens of feet tall where once there were people crammed into cars hoping to arrive at work on time. There had been a revolution in the former Soviet block once the Traveler arrived, just like every where else in the solar system. Unlike so much of the Earth at that time though, there was actually room to expand, to build, and to thrive. There was so much room that space shuttles could be launched with minimal disturbance to the public, so the Cosmodrome had been built; it was humanity's launching pad into a new, and much more habitable system. By the time the City was constructed though, the center of space development was little more than a shell. Fallen had taken as much as they could carry during the initial Golden Age raids and humans had gutted the rest to help supply the City with basic desires, once called necessities. Years had created warped versions of glasshouses with nature blooming in the once clean halls. Were death not so prominent, then perhaps someone could stop and appreciate the spectacle, one of beauty and uncountable loss. There was never time for such pleasantries, especially not for the small team heading into the Comsodrome's ancient husk. “Vell, where the hell is that Warlock of yours?” Krace looked to his side, hoping for a more specific reply finally. He couldn't help but stop and smile at how ridiculous the fellow human looked. His normal armor adorned with a broom melted to the top of his head. Krace couldn't say anything though; he along with Yvette had followed Saint-14's example. All apparently to make them more visible for a sniper hidden out there somewhere in the brush. “He'll be here, but on his own time.” Saint interrupted the conversation with his ever-even tone, “Message him again; we're only about five minutes out at this pace.” There was a strange voice from behind them, one that flitted between syllables awkwardly beyond any form of dialect. It sounded as if the speaker's tongue hated the idea of speaking English, favoring something much more unique. “That won't be necessary.” The four Titans stopped in their tracks, turned, and raised their guns only to see an Awoken standing before them. Cayde-5 radioed in just then, “Oh gǒupì! Something just teleported behind you all!” Saint-14 grimaced to himself and said quietly, “Cayde, we are going to have to work on your response time.” He then brought his sights up to ready, aimed at the Awoken, and said, “Are you the Voidwalker I called for?” “He is, sir!” Vell quickly brought his scout rifle down and stepped in front of his fellow Titans, “Stand down.” “Such... Vigilance or maybe paranoia?” The Awoken smiled broadly, his purple-tinted skin making such a smile appear brilliantly white. His hair was unkempt, wild, an after thought compared to the derisive thoughts constantly bombarding any true Warlock's mind. In contrast, his eyes were equally wild, but in energy, in thought, as if he were focused on four different conversations happening elsewhere in his mind. They were purple, like his skin, and darkened into his pupils, glowing faintly like the Void from which he derived his power. His clothes helped accent the Darkness-treading aspect of his order. No helmet, they were cumbersome. Light gloves, boots, and long coat all perfectly black and kept simple in stitching, emblems, and decoration. Vell turned to the Warlock and replied, “Sorry Revenant, we're in a rush here, trying to get to the Devil's Ketch before they take off.” “Wait, wait wait...” Krace chuckled, “Revenant? Really? That's your name. You've got to be kidding me. That's ridiculous!” Vell turned to look at his compatriot as the Awoken replied, “No, not my name. My name this side of the Reef perhaps, but not the one that saw the day and the night coalesce over the Jovian skies. As for... Ridiculous... I believe you all have brooms on your heads.” Krace's face may have been covered by his helmet, but his body language spoke perfectly the retort that was to follow. Instead, Yvette stepped forward and cut them all off, “I'm sorry, but do we really have time for this?” Saint-14 turned his back on the group and broke into a jog, calling over his shoulder. “Yvette is right. Form up, Yvette and Krace take the flanks. Vell, take the rear. Revenant, stay between us and pick off what you can.” The other Titans followed their orders immediately, falling in line and momentarily leaving Revenant to stand motionless with his head cocked in curiosity. Falling behind, he shook his head and then called inward, tapping into his light, to disappear in a flash of indigo light that shone and swallowed light in the same instance. There was a second where the Warlock simply didn't seem to exist until he appeared as assigned in the midst of the Titans with the same burst of light yet dark. “Another Reef-born? Now, what is a crow doing so far from its nest?” Yvette glared at the man through her visor and replied sharply, “I'm not a crow and the Reef is not my nest.” “What's a-” She added quickly, “Its nothing, Krace. Leave it be.” Revenant shrugged and looked behind him, “Well, dear Messenger, at least you can't be the only one this time. You know I won't die here.” Saint-14 had heard enough, “Keep the conversation to a minimal and only focused on what is in front of you.” He then added to himself, “Ghost, connect with everyone's Ghost, open continuous communication between all of us.” After a moment, he continued, “Cayde-5, we are about to breach the building. Do you have eyes on it?” “Sure do; looks like your best point of entry is a blown out staircase. I can be there in two minutes.” “Negative. Climb the structure; there has been enough damage to it that you will be able to take shots from there.” He turned his head back to the others and added, “This is your last opportunity to leave; this is a voluntary operation.” None of the Titans replied, knowing that continuing to run was all the answer their commander needed. Revenant continued to smile that bright, toothy smile, occasionally blinking from existence to skip a few steps along the path. Cayde-5 watched the five enter the structure and cursed to himself, “Gorramit, I should be in there.” The Hunter holstered his sniper rifle and pushed his cloak back, breaking into a full sprint to cut the gap in between him and the group. His eyes darted around the rusted, crumbling building's exterior wall, looking for enough jutting pieces to scale it quickly. His Ghost chimed in, “This is probably for the best; we'll be able to stay safe and assist as needed.” “How long have we been together now? Safe? Really? Not for me.” He decided on a series of pipes to climb up to the roof. Cayde jumped to them effortlessly and seemed to barely grab the pipe with each hand as he flew to the top. With a final strong pull, he rolled over the lip of the roof and stood, expecting a panorama of the sky and the Cosmodrome's abandoned, ruined ships. “Tā mā de me... Uh, Saint? Gonna be a minute with that back up.” Fallen skiffs were lifting off in the dozens from the center of the Cosmodrome, filling the sky as they evacuated. The expanse of the roof had just as many Fallen running across it, heading to where their drop ships were housed. The ships were scattering in every direction, trying to spread out before jumping into hyperspace. One of those skiffs happened to be heading in Cayde's direction and saw him at the roof's edge. He only had a split second to roll away and take cover behind an air conditioning unit as an arc blast erupted where he had been previously standing. “Ghost! What were you saying about safer?”

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  • The ship continued past the Hunter and disappeared, ripping spacetime momentarily. He peeked his head out over his cover to see the Fallen turning from their destination. His Ghost replied, “It would appear that the skiff alerted the Fallen to your presence.” Cayde shouted back, “Really? You think? Saint, you're going to have company in there.” He ducked back behind the unit and sighed to himself, taking a moment to gather his nerves. The Hunter then pulled out his sniper rifle and said softly, “Alright Gorgeous, time for you to shine.” Still hidden, he pulled out every clip he had for the rifle, setting them carefully on the unit for quick access. He turned, still crouched behind his cover, and took aim. One shot and one Vandal's ether sprayed from the hole in its mask and head. “Thirty-four to go.” Saint-14 heard the shot ring through the comms system and replied simply with, “Affirmative.” Krace checked his rifle for any jams and said with a bit too much glee in his voice, “Looks like we're punching our way through.” The five slowed their pace, moving carefully through the ruins. Each hall and room looked reminiscent of the last. Grass and ferns pushed apart tiles, pieces of computers lay ruined and scattered, and Old Russian decorated the rusted out walls. “Space is waiting.” “Travel to Europa and beyond 3,750 credits round trip.” “Traveler sponsored Travel.” None of the group knew Old Russian, but the Exos had the benefit of automatic translations. Light peaked through cracks in the ceiling, keeping the building lit better than any of them could have expected. Revenant took the time to banter idly, “There is as much dust as ash; we walk on the scorched bodies of those who could have been Awoken as well. The death of so much potential here... Smells like dew and char and screams silenced.” Krace looked back at Vell and asked, “Does he always do this?” The Messenger could only shrug, never really able to explain the Awoken's ramblings. “Revenant,” Saint turned his head slightly to look at the Warlock. “Do you know how to make your void energies bloom?” “You know of the Dark Bloom? My, I'm certainly glad I came along.” He leaned in closer and whispered even though the comms broadcast it to all present, “I know it well; the Void spawns itself in the Light or the Darkness of any and all.” Saint focused back ahead, checking each adjoining room for movement as they progressed. “Ready it, but only loose it when I say so. Understood?” “Unless I find it more fortuitous to use it as I desire.” The Titan figured that was the best he was going to get from the enigmatic Awoken. They could all hear shots through the Ghost communication system and could hear them through the holes in the ceiling. There was still no contact with any Fallen though. The group entered a larger room, formerly a machine shop, producing parts for ships that docked at the Cosmodrome. It was empty now, save a few pillars to hold up the roof, a task made infinitely easier by the massive hole in the center of the room. As they moved through the room, Yvette darted her head back and forth, looking for any sign of movement. “Do you think they're too busy with that Hunter?” Just then, as they reached the center of the room, Saint-14 threw up his hand, a silent order for the group to hold their position. Everything was silent save the fight somewhere above them; yet, there was a faint beeping, just barely audible in the room. “Guns ready! They-” Saint-14 was cut off as one of the room's walls exploded inward, revealing a mass of Fallen Dregs and Vandals already pouring into the room. Some climbed the walls, moving to be above the five Guardians, others circled on the ground, others charged straight in. Just as the Fallen moved precisely, the Titans acted with equal efficiency. Krace stood closest to the now gaping wall and chose to switch his assault rifle for his heavy machine gun with the words “This Machine Kills Darkness” painted on it. He shouted, “Looks like they weren't all busy,” just before pulling the trigger and holding it down, sending a barrage of bullets into the hole. Ether exploded into the air and the Fallen numbers slowed, waiting to enter when there wasn't certain death waiting for them. Yvette readied her pulse rifle, having to shoot over Revenant's and Krace's heads. She focused instead on the climbers, aiming for arms rather than kills. She watched Vandals and Dregs drop from her shots into the range of her companions, but also threw a grenade that speared into the ceiling. Lightning crackled off of it, striking Fallen above and below alive. Arc bolts had begun to fill the air around her and the others, reflecting off of shields and causing their Ghosts' alert systems to whine about losing power. Vell used his scout rifle to pick off the Fallen with shotguns, hoping to avoid as much damage as possible for the group, while Saint-14 used his assault rifle to dispatch all of the Fallen that were dropping from the ceiling. The black sheep of the group was Revenant, who unholstered two hand cannons, each gleaming white. Whereas the Titans' training and discipline were on full display, the Warlock laughed loudly and began shooting into the crowd of Fallen, seemingly haphazardly. He shouted to no one in particular, “Take inventory, oh Scavengers of the great! Remember what was and weep! An inventory of ether seeping from corpses and a dramatic increase in lead mass!” “Would you shut it?” Krace yelled over his shoulder. “Also, reloading!” Vell switched to his machine gun, firing into the blasted wall to try and stem the tide as well; though, there was enough of a gap to allow more Fallen into the room. Saint spoke calmly and clearly, “Flash grenade to the hole; I will put up a barrier-” The rest of his order was cut off as a Captain teleported in front of him and rammed his temple with the butt of its shock rifle. The Titan's shields took most of the force, but it still sent him reeling for a moment. When he turned his head back at the Captain, it was reared up to strike again. In response, the purple slit of his helmet glowed brilliantly and shot a beam of light for a split second into the Captain's face. It recoiled from the light, blinded, but was given three point blank shots from Saint's shotgun. Two explosions went off, flash bangs that killed a handful of Dregs, but sent numerous Fallen stumbling just as blind as the Captain Saint-14 had just dispatched. Vell yelled for his commander, “Take them now while they're disoriented; when they come to, group on Saint!” Krace had managed to reload his machine gun and began pouring bullets onto the unsuspecting Fallen again, but he was joined by Vell finishing his clip and Yvette who had come equally prepared. Revenant on the other hand had brought some more decisive, as he called it. His body dematerialized again and he appeared in the air above the group, rocket launcher in hand. Two shells launched through the air, sending Fallen bodies and pieces of Fallen flying throughout the room. Saint-14 didn't have time to add to the carnage, finishing off the few remaining Fallen in his immediate vicinity. Once they were dead, he ordered, “To me, now!” He then activated a barrier subroutine that projected a dome of light around him and the group as they stepped closer to him. Their Ghosts' power was immediately restored and even overcharged, causing their shields to glow faintly. “Reload, get ready for more. We need to keep moving though, so get ready to shoot on the run.” Thanks once again for the support folks!

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