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originally posted in:The Black Garden
Edited by Hobbes92: 4/23/2015 7:18:25 PM
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Domintoris Awakening Chapter 8

Hello. This an ongoing fanfiction about an Exo named Ithamar. It takes place during the Golden Age, leading up to the Collapse. From the city of Charlemagne on Mars to a top secret meteor base near the rings of Saturn, Ithamar takes part of a security team escorting a VIP where the Vanguard require him. Not all was well during one of mankind's highest points and it surely leads to harder times following the decline of it all. Many other characters join him on this journey; including John, Charles, Henry, Cicatrix, and Jk-Bx and his brother. I hope you will be entertained. Thank you for your time. Comments and feedback are welcome as well. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JxOhiyCY5aFBpIY34Rwn0s-8-Huo76NA0fNf7U-3RAQ/pub

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  • A quick demise is always unfortunate for any protagonists or innocents, but one you can see coming is even worse. Waiting for the inevitable cataclysm is a scary thing to have to deal with. I don't doubt them, but I wonder how Ithamar's team will cope with the approaching threat. As far as what humanity has to deal with in their corner of the galaxy, I can't say for sure this Gar'il is trustworthy. Hiring mercenaries to steal information to use as a bargaining chip and relying on a particularly deceptive individual as his right hand are actions that don't necessarily build trust. And last but not least, I wonder how emancipating his mind from a certain code will change things for Ithamar during this mission. A lot of anticipation awaits until the next chapter.

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