Great job! Very creative and well written. I think this is the best Taken Guardian story I’ve read. Savathûn’s manipulation of his curiosity was great. I didn’t get a yes or no last time, so I’ll ask again: May I add this to my [url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/245771343/0/0]Archive[/url]? I will happily answer any more of your questions about it, and you can always check it yourself by clicking the yellow word “Archive” which is a link to the main post. I have a suggestion for your paragraph structure. I don’t think you should have dialogue from more than one person in the same paragraph. If someone else starts talking, its best to start a new paragraph. By the way, did you make a Gulliver’s Travels pun when Idryll said “Best of luck in your travels” to Gulliver?