[quote]The year is 2056[/quote]
Already lost my attention. Too many stories have this as their attention getter, and it's a terrible attention getter. No joke, you already made me lose attention to the book. It's unoriginal the first 4 words are. And that's all it takes to lose a buyer. Never start a sentence with something not exciting.
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Like I said, work in progress.
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It's just criticism, best of luck though. Books aren't bought as much as they used to be. Follow your dreams
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I know dude don't worry. eBooks are on the rise as well unfortunately