The overall story board seems good. But I would change the names of the country and capital to what they actually are now. I don't think it's realistic that the American people would be ok with changing the name of the country and no less the capital named after our greatest founding father.
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True. I'm trying to create a society with a leader with total hegemonic domination, just like Ingsoc in 1984 but that could be changed.