It's good, but don't do it for drama's sake. Take some lesson that you want to teach through the characters or some cosmic conflict that you want to vicariously show through symbols and actions. This is how you write a bestseller.
Why neo's? Make sure you have a clear reason of why the leader Marcus would choose this type of investment?
English
-
Edited by LiamCDM: 11/20/2015 11:59:17 PMGood idea. I would definitely explain this throughout the novel or in a plot twist of sorts. My moral or lesson would be something along the lines of not sacrificing freedom for safety or how dangerous religious extremism is.