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originally posted in: Finder's Keepers (Fan-Fiction)
9/2/2014 11:55:46 AM
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This is well written but there are a few things that are off. "Artifact" is one, you spell it artefact. And some places its as simple as saying was instead of way or simple things. Good job though. It kept me reading
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