This is well written but there are a few things that are off. "Artifact" is one, you spell it artefact. And some places its as simple as saying was instead of way or simple things. Good job though. It kept me reading
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Three things: 1. While I appreciate that you enjoyed this, it's very old post; 2. "Artefact" is the British spelling; 3. It's written awkwardly for a reason. I wanted this Guardian to be a blank slate. They have next to no description, not even their gender.
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Fair enough. I did enjoy it though, great read
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Thank you.