Came up with this in the past 10mins.
Draped in a cloak of death,
The stench of it on my breath,
Dealing deadly blow after blow,
Bringing enemies low,
My gun enveloped in flame,
Destined to wound and maim,
My blade shall never blunt,
And I will accomplish this hunt.
English
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Dragon may not like it since its not a creed but I like it. Good job on doing it in 10 min, would have taken me 10 days.
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never said i didnt like it hell im a poet my self and have even had one published http://poetry.com/poems/75968-The-Darkness-Within
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You're right I miss read. you're good too.
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thats a poem not a creed BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIG difference
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Don't care, needed to waste 10mins waiting for pancakes to be cooked
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for those failing to understand the difference between creed and poem here is the best example of a creed i can give http://www.army.mil/values/soldiers.html