Try this:
We are Hunters.
We are the dagger in the dark, and the reflection of the scope.
We are first to enter the fray and the last to feel its fear.
We are the wolves in the midnights glow, be we lone, or in our pack.
All our blades will bite deep, and our shots shall fly true.
We Hunt the darkness as we Hunt the Relics of our past.
While our cowls may differ, our goals are all the same; to illuminate this world with power from those long dark
We are Hunters, the darkest spectrum of the guardians light
EDIT: this line may be too dark so i thought:
We are Hunters, moons to the Travellers sun
I thought the moon is good because it is associated with the night but is also out during the day
It still needs work so feel free to add, and thanks for the post, it was fun writing this
English
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if you look at the other creed they all say I not we and unlike the Titan and Warlock creed which sound rigid this one is just as adaptable as the hunter itself
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Much better but too dark, we are warriors of light not dark